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Published: 2012-07-04 18:03:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 698; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 7
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I know it says "Part Two" but this is my main entry; Part One and the Prologue and the Title Page will appear eventually, and they will be all plotty and there will be drama. Part Two is the most R3-relevant, and due to lack of proper time management and life things, Part Two is all I could finish before the deadline. Please enjoy!Edit: Forgot a couple of little things. Oops. Added them. 7/4/12 2:36 PM PST
End Run, Round Three
Draw Back In - Serrin Fabray
Contents:
Title Page - Those Left Behind
Prologue - The Visitor
Part One - The Siren's Call
Part Two - Mass Exodus [Here you are!]
Cameos in order of appearance:
Margaret "Mag" Gables and Sugar Cube
Madigan Sterling and Cheka
David Avery and T. S. Eliot
Florence McKinley and Turbulence
Ian N. Smarter
Autumn Fabray and Jocelyn
Former Brigadier General Jane Delancy and Jolteon
Four young Johto soldiers (based on canon Pokemon characters... because reasons)
Former Minister of Defense Katrya Hayha and Sigrid
Leo Bismark and Stockholm
Deadcoat (I like to call him Mako. It's the hair.) and another Deadcoat's feet
Rudolf Eastwood
Karl Materdae's Bailey
The top of Kathleen "Kat" McGrath 's head
The back of Doctor Marcus Richter 's head
Elliot Dapper
I don't think there are nearly enough cameos. 8T *tries to stuff more in*
Font used was actually created using my own handwriting through the use of MyScriptFont.com .
And now to get to work on those other parts... 8U
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Comments: 18
Pfffft, "The top of Kat McGrath's head". xD I love how many cameos you manged to stuff into a single entry - it's looking wonderful - the pacing is just right, and the emotions are well done!
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*stuffs more people into the panels* xD
Hnguh, thank you! ouo;; I am always worried about these things, especially with this being my first-ish serious comic. Learning as I goooo, aw yeaaah
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Ohmygosh you cameo'd Mag and Sugar Cube I'm so happy ;w;
Best of luck! Your whole entry looks good!
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laskdjskdfj I couldn't resissssst!
Aaaa, and thank youuu! ;u;
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There are enough cameos, my friend. XD A bit too much, perhaps-- I had a hard time figuring out who the focus of the entry was. Still, its a wonderful entry overall despite the previous pages not being there. Good luck to us both for the Draw-Back-In!
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Ehehehhh, I thought that might be a problem >u> There are actually fewer cameos in the other parts together than in this one alone. ouo;; I may have gone overboard...
Hahaaa, but thank you!
And GOSH YES, I WISH YOU ALL THE LUCK! It'd be pretty cool to see Ciel get back in -- I'd love to see what you have in store for him.
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Likewise to you. : ) Thanks!
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*Stands on a tower throwing her shoes and screaming "JERRRK JERRRK JERRRRRRRRK" at Serrin >8U*
But oh man, this is spectacular! The paneling, the timing, heck even the framing and the angles you decided to use really make this pop c: (okay it pops because you colored this, too. Something that many of us didn't have the time to do ourselves)
But still. Serrin is a jerk and he deserves all those injuries.
also Elliot dwarfing Autumn by a million times is adorable. Autumn needs to invest in some platform heels. Yes.
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*Serrin is bombarded by shoes >AO*
Hnggnmnkjksld *curls up into a little ball of "What Do?"* Thank you, aaaa! I don't. I can't. how. ugh, comics are harrrrdddd? alsoIcoloureditassimplyasIcouldandtodistractfromquicklineart but stillllll thanksssss eue
BUT SERRIN. HE. HE UM. HE FEELS BAD ABOUT IT? yes, yes he does and he should, but also he feels so justified
Haha! Ohhhh, man, I think I should've drawn Autumn just the teensiest bit bigger for that scene, but oh, well. What she needs is a portable stepping stool 8U
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YOU MADE IT!! I was worried there for a second.
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Haha!
Didn't mean to worry you. ouo;;
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Oh yes you did! DonΒ΄t try to deny it! You sneaky sneaky person.
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Aw, noooooo! My dastardly plan has been figured out!
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MARCUS'LL SHOW UP AGAIN (or wait... is this one the again? aghhh, timelines!) IN THE PROLOGUE
HIS FACE WILL SHOW UP
SEVERAL TIMES
8U
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