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Published: 2012-08-06 06:29:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Late part of my entry for R3. I'll post Part One when I finish it.End Run, Round Three
Draw Back In - Serrin Fabray
Late part of entry. Prologue - The Visitor.
Main entry here.
Contents:
Title Page - Those Left Behind
Prologue - The Visitor [Here you are!]
Part One - The Siren's Call
Part Two - Mass Exodus
Cameos:
Ken Mason (NPC, no app)
Maria Hazelton and Ophelia
Alastair Landon
Doctor Marcus Richter
Autumn Fabray and Jocelyn
Elizabeth "Liz" Lacewell (NPC, no app)
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Comments: 28
Autumn... is a lot like her dad. Just lookit the faces they put on. Totally related. Yup. oAo This is the most adorable detail everrr okay?
And I just. Am going to keep staring. And rereading at this. Cuz this is really good.
You weren't kidding when you said you were going to stuff in more cameos...
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This was totally planned. Yup. 8I WHOA SHE'S RIGHT HOW DID THIS HAPPEN I WASN'T AWARE IT WAS HAPPENING
Autumn and her father are similar in not just faces they make. ouo They share a love for travel (although Autumn hasn't had opportunity to really act on hers). And I'm sure there are other things... but I haven't thought much about them yet...?
lakjsdlkj thank you eue
Is it really that good? I keep thinking it's kind of cheesy but I am my worst critic? 8U
Haha! Well, Part Two remains my King of Cameos. this sounds like a new kind of tarot card. what? Emma, stop using generators when you're bored. >8C
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nvfjddnsjfndjs This looks so great ;u; And you added Maria and Alastair and Ophelia ahhh <3
I love your story telling skills, seriously~ And you made so many panels and colored everything xDD Great job on this! Autumn's sad face is adorable btw~
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Eeeee, thank youuuu and aaaaaa Maria and Alastair's sibling relationship gets me every time and akalksdfkstinybunnycutecreatureyes.
And there will be more sad Autumn face to come, ohohohoho~!
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This was really interesting! I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
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Aw, thanks~
Y'know I can't wait to see how it goes, either? ahahklasjahahaha //bad at this planning and plots thing
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Her mother? Uh oh... And what a gutsy father. And Autumn.... you show that father whose boss!
Awesome job, can't wait for more!
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If by gutsy you mean generally a butt-face, haha!
AUTUMN. HIT HIM WITH A CHAIR. or... or just. yeah, just teleport him out of the way. that's good, too.
Aw, thanks~ Hoping to have the next part out either tomorrow or next day. Maybe. Hopefully. .A.
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Wow! Thats fast! You're churning them out like a machine.
I wish I was like you... I've been meaning to update Roe's app for a while now... Like three months... And its summer. Like, what should do during the summer other than draw???
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Haha! I've actually been very slow with getting this part out. I meant to have it done like a month ago. And I have the thumbnails for the next part done and it's just been sitting for three weeks waiting for inking and colouring. 8U
*procrastinates like a boss and lets all the things pile up* 8V
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Haha, same. Procrasto-meister.
Maybe this week i'll do it? We'll see...
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Oh man! Fathers and teleporting and old photos? The plot is thickening....great comic! <3
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Scribble ghosts and suspicion and BLOCKED TELEPATHS? Oh, my!
Heeeee, thank you~ o//u//o
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<33 no problem! And scribble ghosts are the besssst
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Haha!
It's only suspenseful 'cause I'm slooooowwwwww orz
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Aw, yeah. Only way to do it!
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Ken:"Allright young missus, go to your room!"
Autumn:"NO U!"
*woop*
Autumn:
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Aw, I loved the comic and the fact that you featured Alastair and Maria being buddies together<33333 I really want to see where this story goes with her father and the whole shadow thing .o.
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Hamglaskjd, thank you~ ouo
I love Alastair and Maria's sibling relationship. (I am such a sucker for these kinds of things, ahaha!)
Ohohoho! All shall be revealed... eventually!
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Yea, Autumn! Time to go bad ass! >8D
If Carina were to ever meet Ken, and has heard the things about him from Serrin and Autumn, she would bitch slap him. 
Anyway, I was sooo happy to see this in my message box, great job!
omg is that thing following Ken a ghost? of the mommy??? 8U
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The man deserves all the bitch-slaps. All of them. He's a pretty crummy guy. And he lied to Marcus. The nerve!
Carina probably hasn't heard much about Ken (if at all, ahahaaaa) since Serrin and Autumn tend to avoid talking about their parents. Serrin especially. Autumn will talk if someone asks about them, but otherwise won't mention them just because.
hkaljsdgkldfSOSORRYFORTHEWAIT OTL
I'm the master procrastinator. It's bad. So, so bad. BUT THANK YOU! OUO
And yes. Yes, that would be Mommy Dearest. ouo IT IS GHOST TIME UP IN HERE
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No one lies to Marcus without a death wish.
I assume Serrin and Autumn haven't, but I also assume after the war and after Serrin and Carina, somehow, reunite, they'll have to say everything about their past, with no sugarcoating. First step to a strong relationship, ya know? And then when they FINALLY tie the knot, Ken's gonna pop up and Carina will beat his sorry ass. :U
Aw, it's okay, I'm a major procrastinator too, and I wasn't disappointed by the comic, at all.
oh noes, Elliot's gonna flip is he sees her, and not to be mean, but I bet she died from alcohol poisoning or something related to it, I remember you saying she had a drinking problem o
WOMAN GET OUT OF MY HEAD *FLIPS COMPUTER*
Yeah, it was alcohol poisoning. Eheh hehhh.
And OOH GHOST THINGS I FEEL LIKE EXPLAINING EVEN THOUGH YOU DIDN'T ASK! Momma Fabs was pretty much ghost-physically attached to Ken, but when he was teleported, she got left behind since Joss wasn't aware of her. So now she's kind of stuck in that area outside of the med wards. Except at night when she attaches herself in a jealous rage to Autumn, since nighttime is when she's strongest (she's a pretty weak ghost most of the time. hardly a distinct form except for those that have the ability to see ghosts straight up, I guess).
But yes! Back to the Sailor Moon Shipping. Yes. I like this. Serrin needs to 'fess up. And then there will be lots of bonding. Yes. Stuff about Ken in the future remains to be seen. He kind of wants to patch up relationships with his kids... but Serrin wants nothing to do with him and Autumn is wary of him but kind of willing to give him a second chance, but not right now, man, there's a war on.
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Ermergerd, I'm psychic.
I was gonna ask, though, so ya. But oh no! Poor Autumn! She's probably gonna have horrible nightmares, huh? ;m;
Who's going to help herrr? Elliot better, or else I'm give him a boot to the dupa. >:U
Ohh and what psychic pokemon does Ken have? Is is psychic at all? Seems so, cuz it talks to Ken like Joss does.
And Mama Fabray better not hurt Autumn, or I'ma get Carina's ghosty grandma to do some ghost-kickin'.who ya gonna call?XD
Anyway, Carina will probably make Serrin patch things up with his pops, and she will patch things up with her family to make things even. Oh, and she'll give Ken the honor of having her glove-less hand connect to his face in a very painful manner, because she's classy that way.
All after the war, of course, if they make it out alive.
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Hahaha, that is spoilersssssss. Except Ken's 'mon. When I drew this he didn't have any pokemon. I'm thinking about giving him a vaporeon, though. So the voice is Mysterious Voice for now. ouo
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Oooh I can't wait then!
Haha, Ken should get a skitty. :U
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