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Published: 2005-04-16 18:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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Description Like an inconceivable revelation
She swiftly appears unexpectedly
Awakening through her bold glare
Once elapsed and flawed senses
These fortunate few
Encountering her magnificent beauty
Men and women of this earth
Intensely follow her lucid path
Compulsively desire her dominating gaze
Obsessively long for her awaited exhale
A serene sense of relief sways
As the splendid creature heaves a sigh
Then suddenly vanishes into the unknown
Leaving behind myths and legends
Of the moment she unveiled herself
Her too becoming perceptible
To those who not only glance but truly observe
Blissfully capturing the concealed essence of Nature
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Comments: 14

zliggy [2005-04-28 13:22:26 +0000 UTC]

nice gallery you got here, very unique, great work here as well, very deep, but i'm finding it kinda hard to believe that you did this during an arabic lecture, i would have been asleep!!

Hope to see some more

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try-dysfunctional In reply to zliggy [2005-04-29 19:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav! I appreciate it You wouldn't believe how boring an Arabic lecture could be, I say better write than fall asleep!
thank you thank you thank you again!

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zliggy In reply to try-dysfunctional [2005-05-01 22:00:33 +0000 UTC]

no prob, and no matter what the consequence of the arabic lecture, u're absolutely right to stay awake, god forbid ur boredom rubs off on the other "eager to learn" students

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hope-n-forever [2005-04-19 19:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice! There is quite a lot of mystery within those words!!

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try-dysfunctional In reply to hope-n-forever [2005-04-19 20:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bro!

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muadhnait [2005-04-18 15:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Damn, venus-fly-trap beat me to it!
There is some powerful imagery there hun, good job!

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try-dysfunctional In reply to muadhnait [2005-04-19 01:25:28 +0000 UTC]

It's nice that many can see themselves in that woman
Let's face it, we've probably all been in a situation where our mere exhale makes the world spin faster so yep I'm thinking I can relate as well!!

Thanks sweets!

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venus-fly-trap [2005-04-18 10:44:46 +0000 UTC]

oh my god you captured ME very well
i am lost for words
heheheh its very good by the way

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try-dysfunctional In reply to venus-fly-trap [2005-04-18 15:20:40 +0000 UTC]

loool sista ur hilarious! Glad u liked it

hihi!!!

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venus-fly-trap In reply to try-dysfunctional [2005-04-19 17:28:11 +0000 UTC]

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Chantaln [2005-04-17 06:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! You've created quite a vision with your words - just who is this magnificent goddess?

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try-dysfunctional In reply to Chantaln [2005-04-17 11:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Well, my mind sort of drifted away during an exhausting Arabic lecture, and somehow I ended up writing this piece.. Now I suppose the identity of the magnificent goddess is open to interpretation I don't think I even know who she is myself

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Chantaln In reply to try-dysfunctional [2005-04-18 18:09:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

hmm......well, now you should make an image to fit the description!

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try-dysfunctional In reply to Chantaln [2005-04-19 01:19:13 +0000 UTC]

maybe I should maybe I should..
Thanks for the suggestion!

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