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***Alternative title: Fight Between the Gods***

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For anyone who closely scrutinised Thunderbolt on the last page, you'll notice that I made a mistake last time. His horn was the wrong way around I've corrected it on this page. Hope it doesn't happen again!

Poor Thunderbolt, nobody likes him and everyone's attacking him

In panel 8, in case people missed what was going on, Earth has speedtravelled (coz he's standing on earth) and created a barrier of earth to deflect Thunderbolt's lightning. Hope it's obvious, I did try...

I'm kinda experimenting around with creating night scenes, and I've desaturated a bit of the colour. It sort of seems to do the trick, it now looks more like night than my previous page.

Why are there no stars in the sky if it's night? Because Thunderbolt's presence has caused massive thunderclouds to fill the sky.

I've sort of changed my style too, though just a little bit. The lines are now a darker shade of the horse's body colour rather than plain black. Made the pixel weight 3px, but it seems to be too thick, I think I'll resume making it 1px for the lineart. And yeah, now my horses have eyebrow ridges! It makes drawing eyebrows much easier.

The shading's all wrong, I know, but eh, I'm still learning. I'll get better one day. For now, you'll all just have to put up with the crappy shading. Sorry...

ALL CRITIQUES ARE WELCOME!

Description
***Alternative title: Fight Between the Gods***

Page 1: [link]
Previous page: [link]
Next page: [link]

For anyone who closely scrutinised Thunderbolt on the last page, you'll notice that I made a mistake last time. His horn was the wrong way around I've corrected it on this page. Hope it doesn't happen again!

Poor Thunderbolt, nobody likes him and everyone's attacking him

In panel 8, in case people missed what was going on, Earth has speedtravelled (coz he's standing on earth) and created a barrier of earth to deflect Thunderbolt's lightning. Hope it's obvious, I did try...

I'm kinda experimenting around with creating night scenes, and I've desaturated a bit of the colour. It sort of seems to do the trick, it now looks more like night than my previous page.

Why are there no stars in the sky if it's night? Because Thunderbolt's presence has caused massive thunderclouds to fill the sky.

I've sort of changed my style too, though just a little bit. The lines are now a darker shade of the horse's body colour rather than plain black. Made the pixel weight 3px, but it seems to be too thick, I think I'll resume making it 1px for the lineart. And yeah, now my horses have eyebrow ridges! It makes drawing eyebrows much easier.

The shading's all wrong, I know, but eh, I'm still learning. I'll get better one day. For now, you'll all just have to put up with the crappy shading. Sorry...

ALL CRITIQUES ARE WELCOME!