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solo-designer [2008-09-04 13:43:11 +0000 UTC]

انا اسفة جدا بس بسال هو الشكل دة انت عامله ولا هو جاهز لانى شفتة عند زميل اخر
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solo-designer [2008-08-31 11:34:41 +0000 UTC]

very very very good design

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rmelsheikh [2007-09-30 14:59:01 +0000 UTC]

great work ya tarek, but it looks so scary...

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ImRazil [2007-09-29 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]

A lot better, I really like the way you worked the glance in the eye . Perhaps you can try it on a bit less-detailed scale on the other eyes? You've done an amazing job on that. The contrast you've made with the black, blue and silver is also amazing, I'd like to see it perhaps some more in the rest of the creature (not more in the image).
The basic shape is also very nice in this one, no more words are messing with the center of your image, that's a definite pro .
Still the lined head on the front of the body is still bugging me as it is getting a bit too much attention from my point of view.
A lot better this time though, the eye is a lot better and the background is 'normally' better. I'd say the background still has some improvement to do, to make the legs of the creature stand out a bit more. The smaller spider on the left is btw a bit awkward to me, it seems a bit too much connected to the main creature. (unlike in the previous picture where the smaller creatures where swarming and looked like they were moving around the creature towards the viewer, which looks more dynamic and I personally liked that element very much ).

Great work though and this is a great improvement . I hope the critic was useful and keep on the good work!

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