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Published: 2009-03-23 20:36:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 429; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Description Why are they red?
The creams of the sky
After a turbulent fight...

Why are they red?
Those rivers that form
For eyes and eyes they adorn..

Why is it red?
The acid falling down
Tainting ever ounce of solid ground...

Why are they red?
The lips that show love
So trite, had enough...

Why is it red?
The bad lands that grow
every hour with tremendous flow..

Why is it red?
you, a hole in my heart dead
The rivers can be no color, but red..
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Comments: 25

xxMyChemAnimexx [2009-04-09 22:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Powerful and gorgeous,
you write beautifully <3

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underworldriver In reply to xxMyChemAnimexx [2009-04-09 23:20:26 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you so very much!

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XxLonesomeDovexX [2009-03-26 02:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

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underworldriver In reply to XxLonesomeDovexX [2009-03-26 04:26:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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XxLonesomeDovexX In reply to underworldriver [2009-03-26 04:31:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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paintedbluerose [2009-03-25 17:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Each one is so powerful, so simple, so amazing. Very well written.

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underworldriver In reply to paintedbluerose [2009-03-25 20:44:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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paintedbluerose In reply to underworldriver [2009-03-25 20:53:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Heroisagirl [2009-03-24 20:47:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the last verse, it's very powerful. I like how the poem is quite simple yet it conveys its message very effectively and beautifully.

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underworldriver In reply to Heroisagirl [2009-03-24 20:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! i appreciate all the kind support you give.

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Heroisagirl In reply to underworldriver [2009-03-24 21:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww. You're welcome.

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wastedxxwishes [2009-03-24 20:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Very descriptive ! Good luck in the contest

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underworldriver In reply to wastedxxwishes [2009-03-24 20:42:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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zefiraelRain [2009-03-24 09:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I likes. Esp the last verse.

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underworldriver In reply to zefiraelRain [2009-03-24 17:27:25 +0000 UTC]

thankies! ^^

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zefiraelRain In reply to underworldriver [2009-03-25 09:20:09 +0000 UTC]

no problem~!

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Aedammair-Feline [2009-03-24 06:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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underworldriver In reply to Aedammair-Feline [2009-03-24 17:28:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Aedammair-Feline In reply to underworldriver [2009-03-24 21:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Np

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yushinmaru [2009-03-23 22:24:11 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool! ^^
I love how you use the words in your poems!

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underworldriver In reply to yushinmaru [2009-03-24 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

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EPAmanda123 [2009-03-23 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]

I love how each stanza connects with the next in a powerful manner. Cool!

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underworldriver In reply to EPAmanda123 [2009-03-23 21:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Sapient-Butterfly [2009-03-23 20:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely written. I love the flow

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underworldriver In reply to Sapient-Butterfly [2009-03-23 20:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I figured i would give the contest a shot.

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