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Published: 2004-09-04 11:56:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 431; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 65
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this is my first design for a brainchild bcard, its a two sided card and displays all relevant info and is stylish (in my view), it will probably include a webaddress when i get one but im not sure if i will put it on yet.i would appriciate some feed back on this one as i plan to get it printed up in the near future.
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word is keep it simple and structured, you've got the balence there with logo and revelant info, so from this side tis all good, remember if that logo's going to represent you it's got to be blatent like it is,
you might want to place the name in a more obvious place because as you'll know when you pick up a business card you don't go straight to the back and you're name is probable more important than the logo so as a peice of info I think you need to bring your name to the front.
does that count as a 5 toned print or simply as 2 (colours), so mainly is it putting more on the bill.
definately not negative here, just structual criticism
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SORRY DUH ISHOULD HAVE KNOWN BOTTOM NE TOP OLS SRY LOL
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Well to tell you the truth, you need more negative area. You also need more information on it. The size of the card and text is too big. If you really need me to I'll dig out my notes on business cards. You'll also want a logo that works good in black and white, displays a postivity, is simple and follows the other rules for making a logo.
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wat its got all the info i need on it, the size of the card 90mmx55mm standard buscard size and the text is just right it stands out but contributes to the design. and my logo aperenly looks great in b/w.
i dont need your notes on buscards i have my own set of notes.
sorry if im comming of a bit harshish but i know how i want to promote myself. still thanks for your opinion i may consider your suggestions for my next design.
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No problem man, it's jsut the resolution is bigger than the real size, and I'm lazy. I wasn't sure if you knew what you were doing, but it does. Looks pretty good though. I still personally think there should be a bit more negative space on the info part.
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i realy like the design but it looks kinda plain on the name side but all in all a good card mabey a background of some type ? . i think the solid white is a little plain its not like you to ever be plain or at least what ive seen you do but i like anyways .its a good start
and that was not random
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yeah i know its looking a little plain but i cant afford to add more to it, its only got 2 colours on it, black and some panton red. but i was going for a simple look anyway just somthing strait to the point, easy to find the info you need.
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heeeeeeeeeeeyyyy doooooood im so trashed.....
nice design, but it needs giraffes, cos giraffesa aare really the antinmeo of the westreen stuff.. eyh keep the faith
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you forgot to say DOOOONT CHANGE you drunk freak, you just kept calling me and calling me
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yeah that is seriously awsome, Its very stylish (don't need to worry about that). Its very simple and that is one of the reasons I like it. Nice Job!
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