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Published: 2004-08-27 11:52:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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-53 pills-pull pull tear tear
look at me im ripping out my hair
im laughing no more do i care
im crying it isnt fair.
bang bang i bash my head against the wall
im getting dizzy
i start to fall.
drip drop bloods running down my arm
im smiling i enjoy doing myself harm.
walk walk to a shelf
searching looking for something else
pull the pills down take 53 im laughing again
look at me
i start to cough i start to spin
what a position im now in.
fear tear
i think im dieing
say goodbye i think im flying
rejoycing atlast because im free
from all the pain lifes given me.
i finally ended it all
with a sharp knife
53 pills
and insanitys final downward spiral.
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Comments: 8
unknown-shadow In reply to Haressh [2004-09-03 20:12:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks im glad u think so ::
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Haressh In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-05 21:20:10 +0000 UTC]
of course. i would LOVE your input on my stuff, tell me what u think of it when u get a chance please!!
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unknown-shadow In reply to Haressh [2004-09-06 02:23:38 +0000 UTC]
ok i did and i got a deviant watchon u so remember im watching u
lol
insanitys final downward spiral
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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-08-30 18:29:00 +0000 UTC]
I hope youΒ΄re not that depressed often.
Reading it again I really feel I should add it to my favourites.
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unknown-shadow In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2004-08-31 00:50:44 +0000 UTC]
im not it was mostly a thing of the past thanks though im glad u think its worthy of being in ur favorites
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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-08-28 18:29:27 +0000 UTC]
This is really, really good! Quite possibly your best work. Those repeated words are really... well, put in the right place so to speak.
Love it.
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unknown-shadow In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2004-08-30 01:14:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks im glad u think so it just kinda happend and once i had the idea it just kinda wrote itself i was depressed at the time obviously and its one of my favorites as well thank you i like ur new one reality also!!! oh yeah thanks for adding me to your friends list!!!
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