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Published: 2004-08-27 20:59:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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-torn mind-the rain it falls down from the skies,
just like the tears fall from my eyes,
my love is gone away from me,
just like clouds over the desert go back to the sea,
my heart it hurts its broken again,
my mind is torn between my love and my bestfriend,
I love them more than words can say,
and am afraid that they both love me the same way,
many mistakes I tend to make,
just like promises I seem to brake,
I continue to stumble through this life again,
my mind is torn between my love and my bestfriend.
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Comments: 6
It´s good that somethings just happens in your poetry. It shows that it comes stright from the hearth.
I´m glad you like my work.
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yeah i guess that it just sorta wrote itself once i had the idea i guess i do kinda have a knack for words lol thanks again
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I like it. Clearly worth my time.
I´m thinking maybe you use the word 'it' when it´s not really necessary. But hey, that´s up to you.
Great work anyway.
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thanks i do kinda over use the word it i dont actually mean to sumtimes it just happends lol i am trying to cut down on it but its obviously not workiing lol i used it to or three times in one sentence there lol thanks again i like ur work 2 its unusual and thats y i like it
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yeah i only thought about it and that one was completely made up bu ti got a friend that thinks about it and theres alot of ppl who do so yeah ur right and that just happends to be one that ot not be made thanks kate
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