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unknown-shadow — without you
Published: 2004-08-31 20:38:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description withot you-

I cant sem to get this right
against myself I hold a fight
my better judgement scres me so
I dont want to have to let you go
without you I feel alone
without you nowheres home
without you Ive lost my mind
without you no happiness can i find
all I have is the thought of you
your memories a ghost, Im trying to hold on to
and all this time ive cared for you
knowing you'll never love me the way I love you
and this thougth it isn't fair
the thought that you might not even care
It haunts me
It hurts me so
I know its true but I cant let you go!
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Comments: 26

malo152 [2004-11-10 15:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Most excellent poem! It's gorgeous. Go you!

ANDLG

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unknown-shadow In reply to malo152 [2004-11-10 15:24:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks ur funny

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mandraconis [2004-09-03 02:26:30 +0000 UTC]

very strong.

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-03 20:50:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-03 20:52:37 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-03 20:57:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-03 21:18:28 +0000 UTC]

lol

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-06 02:54:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah lol ... um im lost again lol to what

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-06 03:00:30 +0000 UTC]

you saying thanks

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-06 03:01:27 +0000 UTC]

no ur saying thanks lol
um .... thanks

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-06 03:03:45 +0000 UTC]

lol, nevermind.

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-06 03:08:53 +0000 UTC]

no lol nvmd what ? im curious now mike?

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-06 03:10:15 +0000 UTC]

actualy im jstu ocmpletely lost thats all.

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-06 03:19:58 +0000 UTC]

me 2 its nice to have a companion out here in the land of confusion lol

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mandraconis In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-06 03:28:26 +0000 UTC]

that it is

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unknown-shadow In reply to mandraconis [2004-09-06 03:34:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-09-01 07:37:22 +0000 UTC]

It IS very good. Very emotional.
Like it a lot.

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unknown-shadow In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2004-09-03 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks im glad that u liked it that much ur stuff is awesomer than mine though!!!

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Soldierofmisfortune In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-04 09:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Nah, it just looks that way.

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unknown-shadow In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2004-09-06 02:34:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks im sure its just "how it looks" as i like to say its a figamintory of my imaginory lol
made up words i use
thanks again

the pain of insanity overwhelms me

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Lament-to-Eclipse [2004-08-31 20:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry about that. very nice poem.

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unknown-shadow In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2004-08-31 21:26:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks for ading that to ur favs brock i sucked though just a quick thought on paper
the fallen angel

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-01 02:24:04 +0000 UTC]

It was good.

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unknown-shadow In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2004-09-01 02:48:58 +0000 UTC]

er um thanks im glad u think so
just like in my own damn reflection i find nothing good at all

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Lament-to-Eclipse In reply to unknown-shadow [2004-09-01 03:21:52 +0000 UTC]

dont be so hard on your self

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unknown-shadow In reply to Lament-to-Eclipse [2004-09-01 03:35:26 +0000 UTC]

o thanks but u know me i dont think of my work or my self in any other way

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