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Words are not important anymore.Just the feather-like leaves falling in the background.
And the gentle snowflakes that rests in your auburn hair.
The fact that you are here with me
gives me all the strength I need to fly.
Yet, your love keeps me grounded.
Tethered our intertwined hearts
and smiles keep us in this moment.
Our bubble of perfection.
A living breathing piece of artwork
that I wish someone could hang in a museum
for all of time
So that others would know what true love looks like.
And that there are perfect moments,
in time.
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Comments: 12
RainySkyz [2013-11-16 06:28:02 +0000 UTC]
ackk! You hide my first comment? You must have been embarrassed or took it as an insult or I worded it in a way that didn't come across as I meant it. How I MEANT it was this: You definitely CAN write love poems VERY well and for a wife who deserves it; AND I like you best when you are your true self (which is sweet, kind, caring, funny, and doesn't have to prove a thing, simply because you already are all you need to be.) If you hide this one, well, then, I'll have to cease complimenting you because somehow you don't like it?
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uturn190 In reply to RainySkyz [2013-11-19 15:30:05 +0000 UTC]
Actually it was an accident. I've been visiting this site with my iPod and it clusters everything together. I didn't know I did it. LOL!
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RainySkyz In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-20 04:49:12 +0000 UTC]
I forgive you. It was a terrible Sunday-Monday. Lotsa problems. Better now.
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dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-11 15:51:45 +0000 UTC]
You did hang that, love. In the gallery of your children's heart/memory.
This is beautiful!! I love it. You do great work.
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uturn190 In reply to dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-15 20:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you stranger for your words of encouragement! Sorry it took so long to write you back. Not on here that often.
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dragon-fly-to-me In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-16 20:39:49 +0000 UTC]
I am strange.
You are welcome. It is a great poem.
See you when I see you.
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uturn190 In reply to dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-19 15:32:02 +0000 UTC]
Then I shall be seeing you when you are seen.
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dragon-fly-to-me In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-19 17:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Well, you are the one who is more unseen than I am
here I am!!
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RainySkyz [2013-11-10 04:18:12 +0000 UTC]
p.s. Please post this on FB so Terry can read and reply. I read it to him over phone and he thinks it's SUPER GREAT! He wants to compliment you on FB, since he doesn't use dA anymore.
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uturn190 In reply to RainySkyz [2013-11-15 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Claudia. I usually don't like to cross dA and facebook to much. But tell him thank you for me!
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