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uturn190 — For Jen by-nc-nd
Published: 2013-11-10 01:42:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Words are not important anymore.
Just the feather-like leaves falling in the background.
And the gentle snowflakes that rests in your auburn hair.
The fact that you are here with me
gives me all the strength I need to fly.
Yet, your love keeps me grounded.
Tethered our intertwined hearts
and smiles keep us in this moment.
Our bubble of perfection.
A living breathing piece of artwork
that I wish someone could hang in a museum
for all of time
So that others would know what true love looks like.
And that there are perfect moments,
in time.
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Comments: 12

vikingjon [2013-11-19 21:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow!  Good show!

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uturn190 In reply to vikingjon [2013-11-26 15:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir! 

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RainySkyz [2013-11-16 06:28:02 +0000 UTC]

ackk! You hide my first comment?  You must have been embarrassed or took it as an insult or I worded it in a way that didn't come across as I meant it.  How I MEANT it was this:  You definitely CAN write love poems VERY well and for a wife who deserves it; AND I like you best when you are your true self (which is sweet, kind, caring, funny, and doesn't have to prove a thing, simply because you already are all you need to be.)  If you hide this one, well, then, I'll have to cease complimenting you because somehow you don't like it? 

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uturn190 In reply to RainySkyz [2013-11-19 15:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Actually it was an accident. I've been visiting this site with my iPod and it clusters everything together. I didn't know I did it. LOL! 

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RainySkyz In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-20 04:49:12 +0000 UTC]

I forgive you.   It was a terrible Sunday-Monday. Lotsa problems. Better now.

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dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-11 15:51:45 +0000 UTC]

You did hang that, love. In the gallery of your children's heart/memory.

This is beautiful!! I love it. You do great work.

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uturn190 In reply to dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-15 20:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you stranger for your words of encouragement! Sorry it took so long to write you back. Not on here that often.

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dragon-fly-to-me In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-16 20:39:49 +0000 UTC]

I am strange.
You are welcome. It is a great poem.
See you when I see you.

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uturn190 In reply to dragon-fly-to-me [2013-11-19 15:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Then I shall be seeing you when you are seen. 

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dragon-fly-to-me In reply to uturn190 [2013-11-19 17:18:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, you are the one who is more unseen than I am
here I am!!

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RainySkyz [2013-11-10 04:18:12 +0000 UTC]

p.s. Please post this on FB so Terry can read and reply. I read it to him over phone and he thinks it's SUPER GREAT!  He wants to compliment you on FB, since he doesn't use dA anymore.

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uturn190 In reply to RainySkyz [2013-11-15 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Claudia. I usually don't like to cross dA and facebook to much. But tell him thank you for me!

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