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VatrixtheMatrix — Pageant-Mobius - Stage 2 - Scorch
Published: 2017-03-15 03:52:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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*GASP* whew, made it. This was SO much trouble getting the time to put together that I'm not even sure I want to bring to up (To summarize it, it involves a week vacation, work, Zelda: Breath of the Wild, and getting a nasty cold that put me out this last weekend). But it's done.For my entry, this is a comic that takes place after the event's of 's entry where his entry was about the events of Scorch and Fringe are on a date in a seaside restaurant in Station Square. Mine takes place after the restaurant where the duo have a hard time finding a ride home since it's the middle of rush hour. And to make matters worse, Fringe has to be at the sea market to set up his stall to sell his goods. And if he doesn't get there in time, he won't be able to make nearly enough money to pay his bills this month. So as fringe looks for a ride, Scorch decides to call in his own and bring in his private jet to get him there in a jiffy.
Fringe the loach belongs to
Scorch belongs to me.
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Ah man, I really like how Fringe looks here! I thought his design might be mroe difficult to work into a more sonic-y style, but you really pulled it off! The backgrounds and the ship are all really nicely drawn. I'm so glad we got paired together. Scorch was a ton of fun to draw, and I really love how this ended up looking! ✨💖✨
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I'm very much glad you enjoyed this. It was my pleasure. And I'm glad you enjoyed drawing Scorch, I designed him hoping he would be fun to draw. Besides that, I'm glad we paired up as well.
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And then the two fly away into the sunset
It was a tad difficult to follow the panels due to the way they're placed, but numbers helped and let this page remain rather entertaining.
I could recommend you to not be shy and practice making poses more expressive tho, since it would make it easier to read the story without having to look into the description. It's the most difficult part of the composing of a picture, but when it works without needing any major explanation, then it's the most amazing thing.
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Thanks for the helpful critique, feedback is always appreciated. And I agree that planning out the poseurs can be difficult since it's very important to tell the story but one only has so many panels to work with. So it comes down to a manner of planning. Which for me, I was mostly worried about the Jet/Walker since I have designed a few cool features into it like transforming into a walker Scorch's ability to call it in with his tech ring bracelets. But I only had so many panels to work with to make clear to the viewers. Anyways, thanks again for the feedback and glad you enjoyed it.
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