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Published: 2002-04-09 14:59:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 134
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Lonliness always gets attention,But never absorbs it.
Lonliness could be surrounded by others,
Yet never feel their presense.
Lonliness could be filled with water,
And yet always be empty.
Lonliness' only friend is nothingness,
And even around her, he feels nothing.
Lonliness was hungry yet had no appetite,
So he forced down dry food -
Only to force it back up.
Lonliness dresses plain and drunk,
He shows he doesn't want attention, but he does.
Lonliness drinks a beer to forget he's lonely,
But then he forgets he forgot, and is empty again.
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Comments: 5
angels-remnants [2002-06-04 00:02:46 +0000 UTC]
absotively lovely
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--whitney
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making animal noises is not at all a proper way of expressing oneself!
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wordman [2002-04-09 18:08:32 +0000 UTC]
xcept for the spelling error, i like it. I wrote something like that once about a girl we'll just call Ignorance...but i burned it...in front of her...
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stay (true)
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ftwdesigns [2002-04-09 15:43:11 +0000 UTC]
lonliness is spelled loneliness
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i am the king of outer space
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uglypuppy [2002-04-09 15:16:39 +0000 UTC]
nice poem btw...
completely and perfectly fits today...
the past few weeks actually...
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-~+ I feel like a cartoon brick wall +~-
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uglypuppy [2002-04-09 15:15:33 +0000 UTC]
lonelyness strives for happiness
yet always inevitably courts dissapointment
or alienation
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-~+ I feel like a cartoon brick wall +~-
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