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Published: 2003-01-21 09:01:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 529; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 42
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Description .:FLIGHT:. - (noun) act, manner, or power of flying.

I was going through the gallery of and this image really appealed to me.

Needed to do something to get out of my block...

I am grateful to Alvin for letting me use his image in this design.

Original image here [link]

Hope you like it !
I would really appreciate some constructive criticism
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Comments: 21

princessztar [2007-01-06 07:37:26 +0000 UTC]

You want Constructive Criticism?
I don't really understand the rippling effects cause that seems to be associated with water more and water has nothing to do with flying.
Maybe your trying to show the wind? But it really detracts from the piece.
The original colors were beautiful I think maybe if you had just sharpened the colors it would have a more natural "flight" type of effect. Cause it would saying flying is freedom like that... I like the borders though it makes the birds stand out more and it kind of like freezes the birds flying for your Flight (n) definition thing, gives it more depth.
I think its great how your trying to express thru that piece that flight symbolizes unrestrained freedom free of all the cares in the world, free to just soar in the skies and it representation of how or what it would be for us to live unrestrained from the weight of our doubts. Umm, I think the noun doesn't work for this isn't it a verb?
Good job none the less...
I just thought I'd give an honest critique since your description says you'd appreciate a constructive criticism.

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versifier In reply to princessztar [2007-01-14 03:30:51 +0000 UTC]

i would, and thanks

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Irishcat [2003-08-17 23:02:05 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I love the colors and whatever you used to get that cool edging effect. Was it something from photoshop? O.o

The definition of flight on there is awesome too!

This ones a fav.

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cinny [2003-07-13 09:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! I love the colors and the ripples. *thumbs up*

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furryphotos [2003-04-04 15:22:41 +0000 UTC]

The colours and the birds are pretty ncie but i dont like those rings or ripples. Sems the disturb the 'flow'.

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mimle [2003-01-31 15:10:00 +0000 UTC]

gorgous colour and softness, and i love the grunge. great work.

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brokenangel [2003-01-30 08:46:14 +0000 UTC]

nice change of the colors, and that ya let the original sky shine through, too *s* the borders look good on it, too, and that ripple effect adds a certain strength to the whole picture *s* very nice manip, Hersh

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bookdiva [2003-01-29 05:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, nice work on this beauty, love the tones and script, love the words. Not sure why it didn't show up on my watch, it's been happening a lot lately.

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koonak [2003-01-26 08:27:36 +0000 UTC]

An excellent job to an already wonderful scene. Nice work!

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stotty [2003-01-24 11:45:55 +0000 UTC]

I thought the original was amazing too - I think thats in my favs somewhere. You have done a nice job on it, the border works well and the text is great. I personally am not too sure about the ripple effect, but I am still seeing the original. It does have a good effect though.

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anne-joline16 [2003-01-22 18:35:37 +0000 UTC]

beautiful art! i like it.

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rajivmathur [2003-01-22 14:25:52 +0000 UTC]

that is quite amazing.

I love this image's composition. You know i wouldn't mind spending an evening under that sky.

Brilliant work!

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tg1j [2003-01-22 06:08:52 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work!! im gonna add this to my favorites

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-tank [2003-01-22 02:55:22 +0000 UTC]

i love the BG colors...great work man
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-

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jibrille [2003-01-21 22:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Very wicked Hersh, The colour, light swirls and sillouete really make this look great.

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sinnamongirl [2003-01-21 18:21:59 +0000 UTC]

love the colour change =c)

it almost looks like theres a force vibrating through the atmosphere maybe even some sort of magic going on. it kind of gives me a spooky feeling.

nice work =c)

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justin-333 [2003-01-21 15:03:19 +0000 UTC]

hey man, long time no talk to bud.
looks great to me my friend
keep up the good work.

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rustajb [2003-01-21 14:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Simple and minimalist, and very good for it. I like the effect of vertigo caused by the radial blurr. Nice job.

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Aliena85 [2003-01-21 11:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Neat edit.. Yep I certainly love the colours.

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rafas [2003-01-21 09:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Cool, the circle, water wrinkle effect and the birds... nice colors too...

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jaxspider [2003-01-21 09:30:40 +0000 UTC]

me likes the colors... you added... and the birds are really cool looking too...

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