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Published: 2011-12-30 23:11:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 925; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 4
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Description After one week, Feliciano still camped out on her lawn. Ludwig spent the nights with him, knowing that Feliciano gets lonely. She won't talk to him but she does leave him pasta on the table on the porch. But one night, the sinister boyfriend showed up. Her boyfriend was a typical meat head jerk that all he wants is to have sex with _____. Now scowling, he munched on his pasta, wishing Ludwig was here so if the guy decided to kick his butt that Ludwig would save him. He couldn't help the fact that he was a lover not a fighter!
"Hey kid." Speaking of the meat-head….

"Ciao." He went back to eating, scrolling though his phone, frantically texting Ludwig about what's happening.

"Why don't you give up. She doesn't like you." Feliciano could hear the smirk and the 'Holier than Thou' tone in his voice.

"I am not going to give up." He whispered, gripping his phone and hoping that Ludwig would get to him before things get ugly, which he had a feeling it was going to. A buzz, signaling a text, he flipped the phone open and just stared. Ludwig is spending time with his brother that just came back from the war. Feli understood, now terrified, he reached into his bag and grabbed the white flag and waved it. The guy, now mad, grabbed Feliciano and threatening to beat him if he didn't stop waving that flag.

"DON'T HURT ME!!!" He started to wave it frantically and  tears came streaming down.

"Hey babe." Meat-head dropped Feliciano when he spotted _____ walking out the front door. Feliciano found himself staring a how pretty she looked. She was wearing her favorite outfit and a smile that rivaled the sun. At least in his opinion. He went back to eating pasta, now slightly cold but still good regardless. Looking up, Feli regretted doing so. There, in front of him, his goddess kissed the Meat-Head and there isn't anything he is going to do about it....sadly enough. Slightly depressed, he opened up the sketchbook and continued working on his picture of ______. Hearing her giggle as the Meat-Head led her to his fancy car while Feli sketched. A light crunching of the grass, meaning someone is right behind him, but he was too busy wallowing in self-pity to care.

"Maybe I should give up." He said to no one in particular. He casted the picture to the side and rested his chin on his knees. Ludwig sighed and rested on his elbows.

"It would be smart, but not nessary right." Ludwig always had an amazing way to justify everything Feliciano, knowing there isn't rhyme or reason to anything he does.

"I know..." Feliciano whispered, still kind of depressed. Silence broke out between them, crickets echoed the now empty street.

"So vhat vill you do?" Ludwig asked, breaking the silence. Feli gave a wild-eyed look, then replaced by an unnatural frown, eyes shining from the sadness he felt at this point.

"I think I should just give this up. But I don't want to either." Feliciano, sighing in confusion, joining Ludwig on the grass.

"Is she vorth all of this?" Ludwig proped himself up on one side, giving that father figure stern look.

"I don't know. I don't want to ruin her happiness because I love her." Feli refused to look at him, still staring at the stars.

"She either is vorth it or not." The father voice came out, sadly enough Feliciano was waiting for it.

"I thought she was." Feli whined, Ludwig sat up, now have the scary look of doom on his face.

"You are avoiding the question. Is she vorth it?" Feliciano sat there for a moment and asked himself. 'is she worth it?'. Then his memories came back. All of the smiles she gave him, even when she was mad at him, if he was in trouble she was there to get him out of Ludwig wasn't. They stayed like that for a good ten minutes then Feliciano gave his usual smile.

"She is worth every second." Feliciano answered, knowing that it was true. Ludwig gave a smirk that said 'That's more like it.'
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Comments: 15

Russian-Runa2 [2011-12-31 22:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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violentluck In reply to Russian-Runa2 [2012-01-01 00:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya kindly!

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HannajimaShields [2011-12-31 03:20:50 +0000 UTC]

keep at it feli i believe in you! WIn me from the meat head!

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violentluck In reply to HannajimaShields [2011-12-31 04:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I couldn't help it....It was the way you said that made it amusing. Thank ya for readin!!

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Silvia-x-Gaara [2011-12-31 02:42:28 +0000 UTC]

^^ good good can't wait for more~

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violentluck In reply to Silvia-x-Gaara [2011-12-31 04:18:39 +0000 UTC]

I'll have more eventually!

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Silvia-x-Gaara In reply to violentluck [2011-12-31 04:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Swweet^^ can't wait~

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SkyWarriorKirby [2011-12-31 01:47:16 +0000 UTC]

I hate the me and the "bf" in here. I'd rather have Feli~

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violentluck In reply to SkyWarriorKirby [2011-12-31 02:03:18 +0000 UTC]

You will have to see~ The original version of this part is in my journal if you wanna take a look at it.

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TheExplosiveSushi [2011-12-31 00:08:08 +0000 UTC]

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violentluck In reply to TheExplosiveSushi [2011-12-31 00:17:06 +0000 UTC]

I take it that you like it?

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TheExplosiveSushi In reply to violentluck [2011-12-31 00:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Very much ^^

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violentluck In reply to TheExplosiveSushi [2011-12-31 00:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya!

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Renatalia23 [2011-12-30 23:47:22 +0000 UTC]

You should post the first version then put it in your scrapbook or something. This is a really sweet story.

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violentluck In reply to Renatalia23 [2011-12-31 00:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya! Never considered it...Thanks for the idea! There is a drastic diffence and faster pace. Ill post it regardless in my journal for y'all to read.

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