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Published: 2012-01-30 00:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3315; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 6
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I am currently limiting the number of rps I will do.Things to consider:
I prefer paragraph/story style.
Capitalization, punctuation, and quality matter.
Longer is better. If you don't give me much to work with, I won't be as inclined to reply quickly, if at all.
This particular Error is at the bottom of my list, and I have temporarily stopped using Kayne for a number of reason.
Sort of the reverse of 'Found a Human'
I primarily use Avisia for this error.
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Hi i am new! I am a male with a rusty sword on his back
-Runs past-
i slide right underneath the female dragon (the monster) and ran the other way. i am very fast!
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My my I'm in trouble amn't I
Uh *looks up at giant Anthro dragoness* maybe we can make some sort of deal
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(Could I be male,a nd the predator be a giant female? Preferably a neko.)
*I simply cower in fear at the sight, and start to shake, and whimper*
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-I cower in fear btw I am a 11 year old boy i'd start crying-
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(My character is named Geoff and i have him in my gallery)*I try to run past*"Get away from me!"
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(since im tiny and cornered I decide to beg for mercy im to scared to fight or run I must beg my way out sees giant girl predator)
Please don't kill me I don't want to die!!!
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I found myself staring at a cloudy silhouette of whatever had found me through my bloodshot eyes. I was very good at hiding from problems, but I knew that this was probably the end for me. I knew running was hopeless right now since I was short of breath and already hyperventilating. And I wasn't in any condition to try to talk my way out of this.
"Whatever you're gonna do to me, just get it over with!" I yelled in whatever of a voice I had left and then nestled my head into my knees so that I didn't have to see what was waiting ahead.
(P.S. I'm a girl. Just wanted to make sure.)
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Do you have a male character?
I cower in fear. I wished my dridder father were still alive. Being a human I was vulerable to all of therse hungry and giant creatures. I was trying to keep quiet. Although I smelled like a human. I was adopted by a dridder. Now I was sure I was gonna die.
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I look past the giant who cornered me and gulp nervously. “Not many chances to escape,” I tell myself as time seems to be running out. “I only got one shot at this,” I say with a deep breath as I prepare to run.
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This couldn't be happening! Her hiding spot had been perfect!
Pulling at the strands of brown hair that fell out of her ponytail Nicoli Burke stared up at the giant that loomed over her. There was nothing else she could she could do. Sure she could try to outrun it but that would be stupid and cowering wouldn't help her in any way. Before she could think Nicoli was on her knees, head in hands. "Please don't hurt me. PLEASE! Just...Just let me go. I'll do anything! Please! Just let me go..."
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(Option 2 kind of... I'm a guy with red hair. Kayne, please.)
I stare up at the huge naga, trying to mask my fear. "Hey there!" I say casually. Maybe if I could amuse him enough, he wouldn't eat me. I had seen many of my comrades get eaten by a giant creature, and felt no desire to suffer the same fate. Having only seen one at a distance, I was shocked by his size. I had never felt so small.
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"heheh....BRING IT ON!!"
*Pulls out a fully automatic shotgun*
"This will hurt. I've also got a rocket propellered grenade launcher, which will blow your head clean off.*
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"Thank you sir." I said slightly bowing in gratitude. Suddenly, I spotted some other humans. "Perfect! Those humans are exactly what this hungry naga was looking for!" I thought excitedly. "Um sir..." I said tapping on his tail. "There's some humans over there. If you needed some help." I said, pointing at a group of about ten humans. I didn't know why I had done that. Most likely so I could be of help. Maybe so I could show him another reason to spare me. I could help him find food. Plus, maybe he might want to keep me alive longer. I could've sworn I saw him turn towards the humans. But I wasn't sure. Maybe I was just seeing things. Maybe I wasn't.
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I hid in the ruins of the building that I lived in, hoping and praying that the monsters that passed through would ignore the ruins. I saw two in particular that really scared me...the naga and the kitsune...although the naga was the one that truly terrified me...
I had covered myself in plants and other camouflage when I heard the sounds of a giant creature approaching. I looked away, and prayed it didn't see me...
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(Option B, Being male human)
Only in minutes did the once prosperous village become rubble and mass chaos. I was a high ranking and rich individual, but was not greedy or such. I gave to the poor as much I could without making myself poor, and payed large tips to everyone I bought things from.
I guess that I got payed back by being one of the few who survived the initial attack, but it had been two days now and all I had was another days worth of supplies and my gun. My gun was finely crafted by the best Iron-smith in the village and had special explosive rounds. I checked it, one in the chamber, and 2 in the magazine. I sighed and kept walking, best not stand still too long. I walked out from the protection of the trees for only a moment, and in that moment a fox- no, a kitsune saw me...
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(Going option A if permitted, and using Pyth [link] )
One could find it odd and unable to be understood how the real world could become such a nightmare in a couple of seconds, seconds that almost seemed to blend and become a lifetime all upon their own. Pythagin did not know what to make about the situation, for one second there seemed peace and good progress, and the next glance people were running and screaming, hunted down and devoured whole and alive by...by monsters!
There was no point to remain in the open or retaliate, that would be foolish and suicidal, and so the harpy child fled in order to find a place to hide and wait the so called storm out.
The plan? Good.
One detail tended to be missing though, and that was the fact the so called location to hide seemed near to one of the predators aimed to escape.
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I can't wait to see your response on this last one I did.
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"Thank you sir." I said slightly bowing in gratitude. Suddenly, I spotted some other humans. "Perfect! Those humans are exactly what this hungry naga was looking for!" I thought excitedly. "Um sir, there's some humans over there. If you needed some help." I said, pointing at a group of about ten humans. I didn't know why I did that. Most likely so I could be of help. Maybe so I could show him another reason to spare me. I could help him find food. Plus, maybe he might want to keep me alive longer.
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*as i gather up my supplies into a small backpack,i nervously venture into the woods,i freeze as i hear a rustle nearby,i look around,trying to pinpoint where it was coming from,or what it was,i flee to a nearby cave. little did i know this was the creatures lair.i freeze in complete horror as i see the monstrous furry beast in front of me,i whimper and shake in fear.
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the little girl saw 3 heart breaking things through her hazel eyes in the last seconds of the ambush.one her dear mother being eaten alive, her dad getting flung to his death and her older sister taking her last breath before dying in front of her.the little girl didn't know what death looked like so she kept trying to wake her up."sis?",she got no response,"you need to wake up now", she began to poke and push her sis hoping she was joking.after trying more and more, harder and harder till she began to cry."please wake up! I know i call you annoying and a bother , b-but I don't mean it, your smart and y-your pretty and i love you so wake up".
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C. (I will be a female. I begged Kayne to spare me. "Please don't kill me! Please! I-I'll d-do a-anything!" (I didn't know his name yet.) "P-pl-please spare me. C-ca-can I please be your pet instead? I won't run away. I swear!" I was shaking. I started to cry. I didn't move. I was frozen in fear. I passed out.
someone wanna role play with me?
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heh why not ill do it!
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I forgot what was gonna happen XD But you can if you want ^v^
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The serpentine man curls his red tail in a circle to block all hope of escape. He picks the comparatively small human up with two fingers, holding her near his mouth as his tongue flicks out and runs up her arm. "Now what makes you so much better than the others? Why should I keep you as a pet when I have snacked on the others I have caught? You think you are the only to beg, the only to suggest such a thing? Hardly."
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"W-well, I can play the piano, I can sing, dance, tell jokes, do tricks, do impressions, play the recorder, & act out scenes. B-besides, I'm really skinny. I wouldn't taste as good o-or be v-very filling." I said nervously. "A-and I-I think y-you're r-re-really c-cute." I said blushing.
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He seemed to perk up, focusing on her more intently now. "Did you say dance?" For some reason, dance seemed to really grab his attention. Cobras were known to be hypnotized by the movement of an instrument, as they could not hear the music of it, so perhaps dance has a similar effect on this large naga.
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I started breakdancing. Hoping that this would entertain him. Then I started to do the robot. Then, I began to do free style. After that, I did the moonwalk. I twirled. But I got too dizzy and fell on my butt. "Oh great! Now this giant naga will eat me for sure!" I started crying.
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The naga picked her up between two fingers, looking somewhere between annoyed and disappointed. "That... is what you call dancing?" He shook his head slightly, "What I refered to is how certain.... graceful movements have an almost hypnotic effect on my kind. It is a very calming, soothing thing to watch. But that... that which you were just doing... No. But you are interesting, so I will give you a little time to attempt to think of a reason for me to spare you. You can consider this while I hunt for more." The naga set her down in a circle of coils, and started to check the area for more to eat.
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(are we still rping this? I kinda like this rp. I've sent you a response. Let me know if I need to resend it.)
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I have about 50 replies to sort through, yours is probably among them. I had some troubles and had to cut back temporarily, but I'll check and see if I have the reply when I'm on my laptop instead of iPod.
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ok. I sent it to you Late last month I think. No it was in july.
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Alright, I found the reply, but I'm sorry to say that I am temporarily not using Kayne. He was an attempt to revive an old character, and some of the changes I tried weren't working. Until I finish developing the character, I won't be rping him.
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ok. I can try using a different one. (I forgot what I said in the rp. Can you respond to that one? It''s ok if you don't want to. 
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"Thank you sir." I said slightly bowing. Then, I spotted some other humans. "Um sir, there's some humans over there." I said, pointing to a group of humans. I don't know why I did that. (Most likely so I could be of help.) Maybe so I could show him another reason to spare me. I could help him find food.
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"Thank you." I said. Then, I spotted some other humans. "Um sir, there's some over there." I said, pointing to a group of humans. I don't know why I did that. Most likely so I could be of help. Maybe so I could show him another reason to spare me. I could help him find food.
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I stared up at him. "Yes sir. I can dance. Do you want me to show you the different kinds of dances I can do? I won't let you down. I give you my word. I always keep my promises too. If you loosen your grip, I can show you. But, I'd rather go home with you. That way, I can really show you my dance moves!" I said.
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"Maybe, you could teach me how to... slow dance? I have always wanted to slow dance." I said. "But, no one ever would." I added sounding a bit upset.
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"Y-yes sir. I did. I can breakdance, disco, & a bit of freestyle. I want to learn a few more dance moves though."
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"Maybe, you could teach me how to... slow dance? I have always wanted to slow dance." I said. "But, no one ever would." I added sounding a bit upset.
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either B: Avisia or C: Kayne
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i just want kayne. (Maybe i can be his pet?)
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(Try to run past but encounter Avisia. ^^)
*I growl as I am cornered*
Me: Why am I always the last one alive...I'm not going to die here! *I try to run past her*
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The kitsune, currently in her full fox form, wagged her twin tails playfully. She pounced, her paws landing directly on either side of the one she cornered, and she lay her head down in front. She quickly lay down and cupped her paws to block alternate directions to flee. Her tongue flicks out to lick the air, like an eager puppy asking for treats or attention.
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