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fuckbois [2014-07-25 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]

OKay so, you're doing a good job okay! I'm going to help you through every single step of the way if that's alright with you < 3
Alright so, you did a good job with the ears, I love them! But you seemed to get rid of the other ear completely, I know its a side view, but the other ear could be in there at least partially. And, I suggest the snout being just a taaad bit closer to the forehead, but you're getting there!
The neck, a little thicker. A human's neck may work like that, but a wolf's anatomy doesn't. 
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See here? Wolf neck's don't have a pause to them like this does, if that makes sense? The entirety of the neck is as thick as the body itself.
And the back part of the neck, that's usually a bit rounder, too. 
But, I can see you're off to a good start though! Much better than my first few tries I can tell you that.

But, the thing with redlines, they can help, a lot, it's not just redrawing, it's telling you with more illustration, where you are wrong. 
I can't always type out how this is suppose to work out, so I need visualizations to help me describe what I'm saying here, if you haven't noticed.
And redlines are just that.

But you're doing a good job, okay? Keep up the good work, and keep on practicing!

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