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Published: 2014-07-24 13:57:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 152; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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amg im so proud of this like you don't even know. I'll eventually color it but uhm I might make this lineart soon.Related content
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Ah well, if you wanted crits on this drawing, I advise maybe a shorter forehead. If you looked at a side view of a wolf, the snout is much thicker, and is practically one with the very top of the forehead of a wolf. And if that doesn't make sense I can pull up an example of what I mean.
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See where they are much closer with one another?
And, the eyes of a wolf are much more circular, not quite rectangular. I'd gladly give you an example but my stash is being a jerk right now, but I can give you the link instead.
sta.sh/01m6p5kcwiuf
And as you can see, the necks are much, much thicker, and they are more connected with the beginning of the snout.Ā
The ear's are fine, you did a good job with the roundness of them! But I'd advise if the right ear was a little more round at the tip, other than that they're fine.
I could do redlines if you ever wanted me to do, too!
But great job, okay? Canines can be very hard on the first few tries kay you just gotta keep your head held high!
Here's a better example of everything I just said
sta.sh/011q3hg9q0mr
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sorry for such a late reply ! thank yu so much man <3 I really tried to follow your advice this time. I'm now gonna go and upload the next result c: this, I found, was eXTREMELY helpful! I love this so much and I can't thank you enough for your help. When I upload the new version that I followed through your advice with, could you check on that one too? :3Ā
I didn't want you to redo the lines because, well, I gotta learn it like everyone else :T the hard way or no way. But, I appreciate your offer :'DĀ
again, thank you so so much for going out of your way to critique this C: it truly helped a lot~!
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