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Well these are my three favourite ThunderClan leaders (though I loved Sunstar too) I loved Bluestar but I liked her even more after reading Bluestars prophecy. That's really when she got my full respectfirestar was of course one of my fav characters, but he was my fav for only the first arc (not that I didn't like him in the other books, I cried forever in the scene where he died) in the first arc he just has so much personality and if funny and mysterious. He is a very loveable character I find.
and then brambestar. A great character that took me a while to trust, like every other cat thought of him since he's tigerstar's son. But I alwAys knew he was good at heart.
maybe I might draw my favourite villains next
anyways I hope you guys like this one, it's been a while since I posted some warriors fan art.
-warriorapprenticekat (Kat)
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Sarosna [2014-04-08 06:12:56 +0000 UTC]
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It's hard to add anything to what Eternal-Black-Wings already said but one thing that I noticed immediately is the quality of the stripes. They could use a little bit more detail as right now they look a little bit disconnected. An extra touch could've been to add some warm light to the right side of the cats to make it look like the warmth from the orange side of the background is shining on them. It looks like you attempted something like that but it's mostly covered by the strong colors on the cats. I love your use of colors and I immediately paid attention to this piece while browsing my feeds so it has a nice impact. This looks like watercolor? It's not an easy medium to handle so you did a good job.
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to Sarosna [2014-04-08 14:55:55 +0000 UTC]
yes thanks so much for pointing this out to me! ive drawn striped before but theyre really difficult for me, so thank you very much for giving me tips on how to fix them. it was especially hard for me on firestar, hes the one cat that gave me big problems.... and the tip on the light i will most definitly keep that one in mind. i like playing with light but thats a hard thing too with watercolors cause they dry so fast and you have to time it right so they move how you want them too. (so yep, this is watercolors
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thanks so much again for your tips, help, and fantastic critique!!
im very happy that it caughtyour eye and had impact thanks so very very much
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itspacrat [2014-04-07 21:48:26 +0000 UTC]
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Yes, these too were most of my favorite leaders (exceptig mistystar). the colors are just so vibrant they make me cry happies (me being an originality freak) and makes me want to just photostock your whole profile. the only thing i would fix is firestar's mouth - the inside tshould end somewhere closer to the face so it dosent look like you painted a mouth on a round object. that's it. other than that, it's fantastic! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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~Das It.
just to fill up the last twenty spaces, i like cat's cheese, and butter lotsa butter.
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to itspacrat [2014-04-08 14:49:58 +0000 UTC]
that makes a lot of sense, firestar was the biggest challenge for me on this piece and his face was giving me grief. maybe i should have added some black in the mouth and shown the teeth more?? thanks for pointing that out for me!! I really appreciate your fantastic critique!!! makes me very very happy
P.S. i love thr extra bit you added totally made me happy! youre epic!!
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itspacrat In reply to WarriorapprenticeKat [2014-04-12 00:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you! XD don't get that much. there's a saying "a man of many words is a fool" and really did prove that with the critique because i was @ least 40 or more words short. XD we are bf's now and we must trade pokemons. :iconmustplz: MUST.
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to itspacrat [2014-04-14 19:54:41 +0000 UTC]
yes, they say keep your relies short and smart and powerful
oh my gosh, you play pokemon?? thats super awesome! do you have the X or Y game?
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itspacrat In reply to WarriorapprenticeKat [2014-04-17 01:07:02 +0000 UTC]
LOL i never passed gen 3, so i got a long way to go XD
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Eternal-Black-Wings [2014-04-07 19:03:10 +0000 UTC]
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This picture is absolutely lovely! The colors, their expressions and just the way it all comes together, its beautiful and I love it!! Bramblestar looks especially great with the brambles coiled around him and you did an awesome job on his eyes, the colors and the shine is perfect. The only places I can see that need a bit of critique is the angle of Firestar's head seems just a bit off like the whole left side could be pushed to the right a bit, and in Bluestar's legs with the way she is facing I think her chest would stick out more, covering the left leg more and the right leg would be showing more, if that makes sense. Other than that this is wonderful, really, really great job!
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to Eternal-Black-Wings [2014-04-08 14:46:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much for your critique! i thought itd be neat to add something to each of the cats that somehow connected to them, like bluestar is by an eving sky with stars, firestar of course has bright flames swirling around him and brambleclaws got his thorns. took a bit of thinking on how itd look good together, but im happy i did a good job on that
I had a hard time with Firestar (hes the one who gave me a lot of trouble) i spent a long time trying to figure out with what looks best...... i wanted to make a sequence wjere bluestars head is to the side and then firestars is 3/4 looking forward and bramblestar is completly facing forward. i think i should practice drawing cats more again sin ce ive been drawing so many wolves, hhahah
thanks very much again for your critique, i know now what i can start working on ^^
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Eternal-Black-Wings In reply to WarriorapprenticeKat [2014-04-08 23:35:26 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! I love helping others improve
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PercyJackson7 [2014-04-08 16:24:46 +0000 UTC]
I think my favorite leader is Firestar. But Bluestar has most of my respect. She's such a wise and dignified leader - out of these three she would've done the best job leading ThunderClan. Though Firestar is the best CHARACTER, Bluestar earns the top leader award!! Bramblestar is good too, I'd say, except we don't get to see him anymore, so I don't know how he did.
This is awesome! The stars, sky, brambles, and flames around them were amazing. The eyes and exprerssions were beautiful. Great work!!
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itspacrat [2014-04-07 21:43:56 +0000 UTC]
LOL i am reading the first seiries... after reading 3 and 4 XD i almost forgeot bramblestar was a leader now.
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ZiMAGOTCHI [2014-04-07 20:11:15 +0000 UTC]
Aww crap i still need to read the newest books im behind in the series i started it in September
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to ZiMAGOTCHI [2014-04-07 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh then I'm sorry for the spoilers in my description!!!! (And the title hahah)
what book/series are you reading at the moment??
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ZiMAGOTCHI In reply to WarriorapprenticeKat [2014-04-07 22:45:54 +0000 UTC]
Im reading like the power of three 2nd book
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WarriorapprenticeKat In reply to Cloversplash [2014-04-07 20:33:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks sooo much!!! I'm glad you like it ~
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