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Published: 2003-07-26 15:00:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 55
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Description Captured Freedom

We act, we react.
We feed, we consume.
Ignore all feelings,
trapped in a room.

Walls closing in,
there\'s no way out.
Feelings collide,
you want to shout.

Nobody around,
to hear your voice.
You were thinking,
you had a choice.

Fake reality,
how it should be.
Fading away,
now you\'re free.

Time goes on,
images pass by.
It can\'t be stopped,
you don\'t know why.

You cannot resist,
nothing is true.
As long as it\'s good,
that feeling inside of you..

-Webby-
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Comments: 5

kierakiller [2008-12-30 16:21:28 +0000 UTC]

this peom has a strong meaning....i was absorbed into this piece of writing word by word i know how it feels and the aura this poem has touches me, you did very well plz make more... i will look at your other work when i have time.

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seravane [2003-08-14 19:13:09 +0000 UTC]

agrees with all stated above

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anansie In reply to seravane [2003-10-20 09:38:01 +0000 UTC]

You're just saying that because he's your boyfriend .

Nah... nice one Webby

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danceman [2003-07-26 15:04:11 +0000 UTC]

sadly true yes but we keep doing anyway well written too.

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tainted-love [2003-07-26 15:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Thats so true . Good point ^_^

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