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Fae-Oaksdaughter [2019-11-09 09:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Hello!  Fae Oaksdaughter here from ProjectComment.  I know you did not ask for any constructive criticism, but I hope I am not overstepping my bounds in order to offer my wee thoughts!

The use of colors here is phenomenal.  Great use of earthy tones highlighted with colors of gems:  turquoise and copper and magenta hair to underscore her otherworldliness.  I also admire the subtle lighting behind her hands.  This makes her appear all the more mystical and magical, like a faerie of the wood.  So too do the tawny eldritch markings on her lower limbs and the fact that her feet are bare and pointed in a dancer's pose.

I like the shining, gleaming blade in her left hand.  Her right hand appears to almost be reaching out towards the audience, but in such a way as to be in a nonthreatening manner.  From her expression and weaponry, she seems a potentially fierce, currently curious woodsprite who can take care of herself.

The one thing I would change is the positioning of her lower body.  As is, she is suspending unsupported in such a way as to seem less magical and more unfinished.  But again, this is just my own personal opinion.

That's all the feedback I have for ye right now!  Hope that helped.  Really nicely done for an adopted base, overall.  It looked like it was fun to dress up this doll!

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Fae-Oaksdaughter [2019-11-03 00:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Slithy, sleek
slinks through the forest
bare toes dusted with earth
as silent as a spider
as soft as a breeze
as light as the first frost
alighting upon delicate gossamer strands
dew like pearls dangling upon webs.

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