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Weeze1013 β Jack the Ripper
Published: 2010-08-09 06:56:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 3959; Favourites: 122; Downloads: 13
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"Hello miss," he says with a smile,"I'd like to buy your company, if only for a while."
"It won't be cheap.", she replied with a grin.
He takes her in arm and they leave the inn.
They stroll for a bit until they arrive
At the destination where her buisness did thrive.
She made her advance but he did deny.
He unveils his knife, she lets out a cry.
Turning to run, she had no success.
Her warm living body, now a bloody mess.
The slashing and stabbing, feeding his murderous thirst.
He slips away still hungry, she's only the first.
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Very nice poem! Simple yet marvellous. Great work!
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Well thank you very much.
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Thank you very much
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Awsome! XDDD
I can hear creepy music playing with this.
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Thank you very much!
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Well thank you very much, that is flattering
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Is she Liz Stride? I adore Jack the ripper and your poem is awesome
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You adore the ripper? He is but nothing compared to the springed one.
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Hey, Deathra-Sorrows,
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omg i loooooooooove! i'm becoming quite interested in old jack due to my bff
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This poem made my day. Simply amazing. <3 VERY COOL!
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amazing poem. i'v always enjoyed the old story of Jack the Ripper, and often like to imagine how long he would have lasted in today's society.
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i love your little writers block emoticon! how do i get it???
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Well thank you very, very much
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So how has your summer been?
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Thank you very much
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I like this but at the same don't.
Jack the ripper had a 'copycat' called the Yorkshire ripper, just as famous, but only happened about 50 years ago, well he murdered about 30 prostitutes too...all from my area. I had a talk from his first victims son a few week back, i cried. It was awful.
Then a few month back around november, we had someone called the 'crossbow cannibal'
He was in my TOWN. That's how close he was, we had curfews and everything, he'd studied jack the ripper as he had a degree in criminal phsycology, and he went round killing prostitutes too, dumping them in the local river...he was caught within a few weeks, but i hated going outside at the time.
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YOU were in the same town as the Crossbow Cannibal?
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Yup! My auntie was on the prosecuting team 
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damn, only life threatening moment I've ever been in was nearly getting rammed by a goat in a petting zoo.
i don't mean to arouse any bad memories of the event but I've only herd a little about the guy on the news, three victims and a life sentence in jail, and of course his notorious name "the crossbow cannibal" i was wondering if you knew any more about the guy like about his victims or why he called himself a cannibal?
please I'm greatly interested
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Haha! That happened to my dad once! Was amazingly funny! He studied criminal psychology and became obsessed with the two rippers (jack and the yorkshire) he used a crossbow to kill his victims and took a bit of their body just as jack did. He was clearly insane as he didn't care if caught, he was caught on the CCTV camera near a river killing a prostitute (i think she was) and then stated his name as the crossbow cannibal.
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huh, studies criminal psychology. do you think he actually eat part of his victims? like did they find human tissue in his stomach or mouth?
And you'r dad got his by a goat too? HA!
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I can't actually remember, I don't think so, but I could be wrong...it was 2 years ago and once he was caught us locals never paid much attention to it...and yeah he's now terrified of them...it's so amusing! Hahaha
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hehehe. it happened to me when i was five and my dad was filming it. he kept telling me to get closer to the ram thinking it was tied to the post. then it reared on it's back legs. hahaha he was so scared he dropped the camera. luckly the goat ran past me. and all you see on the tape is a sidways little girl waving "BYE"
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Oh we didn't get to film it...I don't think I was even alive!& haha!
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say this is really off-topic but have you seen the new movie Tintin
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Haha no I haven't why?
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well you should. regardless of the fact that you've read the comics or not you really should watch it. Best Stephen Speilberg this year. total must see.
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Haha! Okay then, I might have to watch it
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i spelled Steven wrong... yea i fail when it comes to wrighting
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I have heard of "Crossbow cannibal" but never yorkshire ripper. Jack was the BOSS though, way cooler. I can see why you might not like it.
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youve heard of the crossbow cannibal ? really? You're american right? Didn't think it was that big enough news for global..he pleaded guilty thank god.
No it's a brill poem, and i used to love jack the ripper until i had the talk and the crossbow cannibal rampaged round my home town.
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I would say that is world news material.
I can see why you would feel that way. He could have got you or someone you knew.
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Haha he only killed like 4 people! And in such a small town.
True, but we had safety measures and it was clear he went for prostitutes
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Still news worthy, I mean his name was crossbow cannibal. I saw video footage of him smiling at a camera right after he killed one of the prostitutes.
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In court when they asked for his name he said 'crossbow cannibal' what a freak!
He made a lot of mistakes, didn't think he cared tbh
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Yeah he obviously wasn't trying to get away with the murders.
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He didn't care when he was caught :/
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Good thing it was sooner rather then later
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