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Published: 2007-10-12 23:35:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 548; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Broken wings and foolish dreamsThings that make us think
We live to love and love to live
The only thing that makes us give
A lonely hope of distant truth
A loss that we all share
Has reigned itself upon our hour
And makes us hide and fearfully cower
Thr arbitrary being settles himself in our land
Only wishing for pain
However, we have wished the opposite
Though our human wishes we do not get
And when he raises his alabaster body
Back into the fiery sky
We cry in pain with tears of hope
But with this god we learned to cope
The moral of this morbid story
Is what you have learned
Live the moment and want no more
Learn to cope with what is yours
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Comments: 11
Wow. I really like this one. It reminds me of someone elses writing, but done your way. Very nice.
Too bad I can't remember whose....
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Thank you ^_^ I like this one too. This actually just came to me, no thinking involved. I just started typing and, there is was...amazingness! hmm, I wonder, I wouldn't know whose writing it sounds like...poe?shakespeare?frost?
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Definently not Shakespeare. Shakespeare tended to write in iambic pentameter (usually blank verse) or sonnets. Poe, I don't think so. Frost, definently not.
Hmmm... who could it be?
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I have no clue. But...I hate iambic pentameter...ithas always conused me...I really can't think of who it could be...
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I love Iambic pentameter.
And I can think of who it could be.
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Oh, then who is it?
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Why don't you tell me?
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*giggles*so I take it I got it right?
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