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This was impossible. I felt disorientated by what I saw. It was like a dream. In front of me was a bridge made completely out of playing cards. "Are you ready, Miss Valentine?" I looked into his grey eyes. "John, you have to be kidding me. This is impossible." I said. "Miss Valentine, you live in a city that floats in the sky, you've seen and used technology that stopped time, I am immortal and you've just met a boogeyman. So why can't you believe in a bridge of cards?" He asked me. "He has a point Em." Zoe said to me. "C'mon we have to hurry." John added. "The Order will be here soon enough." All four of us crossed the bridge. I turned around when we were at the other side and saw the members of The Order coming. "I'll handle this." Theodore said. He stepped back on the bridge and we all watched as The Order came closer. They were on the bridge when Theodore opened his dark green coat and unleashed a murder of crows upon them. "Run!" He yelled. We turned around at that exact moment and made a run for it. One of The Order members escaped Theodore and reached us, pointing a weapon at us that I had never seen before. "This rebellion ends here." She said. "By permission given by her majesty the Queen I am allowed to kill if you don't surrender." She continued. "Now, now Annabelle, don't do thinks you might later regret." John said as he did a few steps forward. He pointed his cane towards her and it was that moment that I noticed that the handle was in fact a revolver. "Or make me do things I might regret." He added. "How do you know who I am?" Annabelle asked. "Let's just say that I know a lot of thing, Annabelle. You can stop this Annabelle. No one needs to die, don't be a puppet of the Queen." John said. "You are right, sir. I can stop this, no one needs to die. So surrender or else I'll shoot. "I'm so sorry Annabelle. Would you please give a message to the Queen?" "Well, what?" John pulled the trigger and shot her in her chest. "Exactly that." We ran further and noticed that the crows were following us. Theodore made it. "What do you know of the Queen?" Zoe asked John. "The Queen is not who everyone thinks she is. She is the face of evil in the heart of darkness. We must find her to stop this nonsense." "But first we need to find someone else." Zoe said. We looked at her. "In the Vale is someone I need to see. A lot depends on it." "Okay." John continued. We'll go. But we need to be careful and we need to be armed." "I always am, John." Zoe pointed at her tool belt. "This ain't just Do-it-self stuff" "Well and I am a living weapon." Theodore commented. They looked at me. "I'm a spy, what do you think.?"We reached the Vale shortly after. I'd never such a plant life. Except for the usual trees there were crystal trees everywhere around us. Each in a different color. The earth seemed to breath under violet sky. The flower flew through the sky just as the clockwork gears high above us. In the distance was a woman, dressed in a red and white gyspy dress and she was hooded. Her eyes were covered by a blindfold. Her dark hair fell out of the hood. "Cassandra?!" Zoe said. She raised her head and arms. From her back sprouted angelic wings made of light. She was now floating in the air. "I am the Seer of the 7 worlds. Your future is filled with darkness and betrayal. Open your eyes, to see the truth to which you are oblivious." Her voice echoed in my head. She lifted her arms ones more and her wings shined brighter. From the ground came an army of undead ready to attack. "We are not here as your enemies, Seer of the Worlds." John said to her. "Silence, Immortal. Behold your future…" Her wings shined even brighter and blinded us all. When it was gone, we found ourselves back in Windsor, which was completely destroyed…
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Comments: 5
WhyIDontKnow In reply to AshHallow [2012-08-12 21:37:01 +0000 UTC]
ThnQ, ThnQ, ThnQ. If you want the intro I can send you.
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TheFS [2012-08-11 19:03:28 +0000 UTC]
I might be more inclined to enjoy it if it was set out a little better: having new lines for a new character's speech etc... it might help order the action, since a lot happens in a short amount of time!
But other than that, there's some good ideas, which I'm sure you're going to go on and expand in the coming story. Keep it up!
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WhyIDontKnow In reply to TheFS [2012-08-12 11:08:31 +0000 UTC]
Well ThnQ alot, I can really appreciate this kind of stuff.
So Thnx for reading and commenting.
(If you want i could give you a link when the whole story is on dA)
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