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Published: 2008-08-01 14:49:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description                                                          Please.
                                             Please just look at me.
                                                       Notice me.
                                                   Just look at me.

                                                          Just
                                         Turn your head a little more.
                                                   Meet my eyes.
                                                 Just a little more.

                                                        Please,
                                            Can you smile at me?
                                                        Smile?
                                        Let your eyes smile at me?

                                                        Love.
                                            I'm so in horrid love.
                                                      In hate
                                      That I can't have your love.

                                                       Tears.
                                           I'm shedding, crying,
                                                    Weeping.
                                But that can't make you look at me.

                                                     Nothing.
                                  There's nothing I wouldn't give
                                Just to have you look.  Smile. See.
                                                   Love.  Me.
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Comments: 8

Valedhelven [2008-08-11 19:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Great piece... especially for those of us who may have felt this way at one time or another, but now can look back on the desperation of that moment with a sort of melancholy fondness that we wouldn't trade for anything. *sigh* Ah, memories...

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willowghost In reply to Valedhelven [2008-08-11 22:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my friend.

Things are much easier when you can look back on them and be proud that you have endured.

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Valedhelven In reply to willowghost [2008-08-12 00:29:26 +0000 UTC]

So true, so true!

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Haxerbek [2008-08-05 13:49:02 +0000 UTC]

wow this is a really neat piece
I just posted a new deviation that I had to put alot into
before I felt like it was the way I wanted it, and that it was even done
I'm feeling like u are right now....its a new feeling being in love and getting none in return...and it also sucks lol
check my gallery
my new poem is called Thinking of you...

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love-runner [2008-08-02 18:14:39 +0000 UTC]

I really do love this...it's so emotional.

Incredible.

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willowghost In reply to love-runner [2008-08-03 14:09:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad.
I often fear that I sound TOO emotional.
Thank you for favoriting this and for adding me to your watch.

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love-runner In reply to willowghost [2008-08-03 22:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Of course

And there's never too much emotion in a piece

Just adds life to the piece

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willowghost [2008-08-01 14:50:05 +0000 UTC]

if anyone knows how to center justify writing, please tell me.

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