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WithoutAbsolution — Hallowed Be Thy Name
Published: 2007-10-29 02:38:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description You came to me at midnight,
where your whispers did abound,
devoicing spells to take us away,
where our love cannot be found.

Cascading ebony down your spine,
a beauty devoid of flaw.
Your footsteps tumbled toward me
as my anguish soon withdrawed.

You eluded my gaze so many times
when you'd come to me before.
But here I saw you sitting
so seductively upon the floor.

And I took you into my arms
where I pulled myself inside.
Drenched in tragic ecstasy,
bleeding as you cried.

You went limp as any other
in rapture as you came.
Bloodied by the knife within,
Hallowed be thy name.

Now I sleep in wasted chambers,
six feet below the ground.
Breathing the air you're screaming for,
But you're screaming without a sound.

And your body hath not risen,
your time had hardly come.
When you were penetrated smoothly,
and spilled forth like scarlet rum.

The scent intoxicating,
but not satisfying my greed.
And as your icy lips I taste,
I sought redemption on my knees.

Your life had not been taken,
for in death you were the same.
I praise you as my goddess;
Hallowed be thy name.

Now I lay you in a coffin,
gothic blessing wrapped in red.
Blackened was the sky at dawn
as the rain from heaven bled.

Your lips were kissed so slowly,
as I chose only to descend.
And again I laid inside you,
where pleasure still transcends.

The halls have all gone quiet,
your funeral dress is torn.
Fingertips burning passion
I feel your soul as it's reborn.

Your lips beneath me are merely glass,
as your eyes are gently closed.
You'll come back to me in phantom,
let your body decompose.

Your silhouette in the curtains,
a succubus being framed.
The silence has been broken;
Hallowed be thy name.
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BellicoseBreakfast [2008-03-16 03:44:17 +0000 UTC]

'Withdrawed' should be 'withdrew'. I think you did it for rhyming reasons, but even then it has 'ed' on the end. Maybe 'my anguish tried to withdraw' or somesuch.

I like that you've got 'hallowed be thy name' three times. Gives it weight.

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