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copperphoenix [2004-10-10 14:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Very nice use of reflected cloud colour as a defining line between the light and dark half of the image; this seems to be a theme in your sunset shots, and you're doing well with it, IMHO.

I do wish you had a higher resolution, because the roundness of the moon is affected by the relatively low resultion of your camera.

You've got good subject matter, and I'd say you have a nice eye for composition.

As you improve, though, I'd like to see you explore more creative shots, as you get more comfortable with the standard views. For instance, in this case I'd like to have seen what happened if you had tried turning the camera at an angle on this shot, so you captured the cloud line dividing the light area (with the moon still fairly central) from the dark area at an angle that bisects the frame diagonally. It might have worked, might not have, but with solid captures like this in the traditional view, it might be a good direction for you to explore taking your work in order to broaden and develop your creative base within this medium.

You've done some pretty nice work in these, so far, considering your equipment, though; given how new you are to this kind of artwork, I'd say you have a lot to be proud of, in these images.

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interrupted-laughter [2004-10-07 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]

oooh.... pretty...

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