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Published: 2011-11-29 01:24:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Though I try and make the wayI fall to my knees, day by day.
I get up and try to move
I walk forward only to say.
I got no more, let me go.
I can't move, so let me go.
You hold tight, I try to fight
I can't break past so let me go.
I yell out in vain
still full of pain
ever searching for my cane
tears flowing to make a stain.
I cry out past the sky
though I don't know why
You hold me fast in your mind
I can't seem to break this kind
For its a lot stronger then I know
Though you dont care, I continue on, so.
Let me go, I got no more.
So let me go, I can't move anymore
I try to fight, but you hold tight.
I can't break past so let me go.
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Comments: 4
If you are going to rhyme please do so consistently, rhyming only has a true effect as long as their is a consistent rhyme scheme
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it was more of a songy type thing. but yes i feel you. ile work on that. critique it please!
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Alrighty that is all I ask. Consider that my critique
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