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Yay! 8D I know this took a long time, but there was some confusion between me and *KMCStudio , and I inked this page.
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Well, apparently the alpha doesn't approve of the water bag tossed at him. The beta, (who is actually a big part of the Wolved's plot, you'll see! >D) tries to stop the Alpha, but it doesn't exactly work out.
All the Beta can do is rush the others off to take cover from his rage...An hour later Red begins to wake up, and well... you'll see what happens in page six!
EDIT Also we have a scenary change!
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apparently not..gotta look out for those blind people (*laughs tackily at own pun*) get it? LOOK out for blind people?
...ignore that; i'm just being stupid.
so anyways, "scenary" in your artist's comments should be "scenery."
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XD thanks. I take it you're a Grammer Nazi? Good, I need one alot of the time. 
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haha, i've actually described myself with those exact words! and good, you're not rude or standoffish or conceited like some of the other people i try to help. thanks for being open to criticism!
oh, and "alot" should be "a lot." for some reason, it's wrong to put it all as one word.
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Yeah, I personally get excited over it. I'm "hungry" for constant improvement.
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i see a face on the bottom of the main tree on the last panel
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yep! It's there on purpose.
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Ooh! My only critique would be that the last panel doesn't make as much sense, as red has scratch marks, where wolf jaws are designed for crushing, and their claws aren't dull enough to do more then scratch the skin. >.>; Heh... anyway, nice page. I like the face on the tree XD
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Thank you!
And yeah... I kinda forgot, funny I'm such a hypocrit, then I go and make the mistake that annoys me when I see others do it!
And yeah, that's why I put the yellow caption saying "Some time later..."
And yus that face.
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umm, anyone else notice the face in the tree at the bottom of the page towards the right a little?
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Heh, someone else did! 
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8DDDDDDDD *sees some BBA fonts!* XDDD
That's amazing! 8D I really love the way you draw and colour!
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OMY, Why thank you!
I try my best.
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Excellent job with the shading!
btw, is that a face at the bottom on the tree? It kinda looks like one
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Thank you! And yus. A ghost wolf face, no less.
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Aww poor Red... can't say he didn't kinda deserve it though! xD
Note is the beta right?
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Well Red just kinda shot himself in the foot there, now didn't he?
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Well his choice certainly wasn't smart!
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Yeah, general rule of thumb: don't fuck with the alpha. Apparently he didn't read the handbook.
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Blind and short tempered with a hint of thinking he's superior.
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Geez! you just gotta love the backrounds you do
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Aww! Thank you!
Really there quite messy.
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