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Wolvekit — CC: Savior Audition 1
Published: 2011-09-01 04:08:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 817; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Audition: 1 | 2 | 3Round 1: 0 | 1 | ?
Notes about Sav: He's pretty sneaky for a big white dog... not really. That kid is just rather unaware. But he is capable of doing things without much fanfare....ohgod how am I going to complete the other 2 pages on time. x___x
Look at those amorphous gray blobs in the background. LOOK AT THEM. Aren't they amazing. They're pretty much the best backgrounds in my gallery. /sob
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I've never made a comic before. CAN ANYONE TELL WHAT'S GOING ON? Why does Sav's face/body change every panel? WHY DOES EVERYTHING CHANGE SIZES AND ANGLES? I don't understand what is happening to meeeee ;o;
/drags self across floor
Savior (c) ~Wolvekit
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Comments: 17
I love how gritty and dark your comic looks 
Keep it up, it's looking awesome~ <3
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Thank you! I'm glad it seems to be coming across well!
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Oh wow. This is a really fascinating style! I am so curious as to what will happen next!
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You have an interesting style, I like the use of the textures but they can be a bit overwhelming in some panel. Like the third one, or fifth one, for example. Otherwise looks great and keep up the work! Deadline looms over our heads!
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Haha that's what I get for throwing photoshop brushes at it until it dies. xD I think I had intended for those two panels to be less clear, although for what purpose I have no idea.
I'll probably try and switch to a less time consuming style... MUST. MAKE. DEADLINE. xP
Thank you!
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Lol its okay, I had the same thing when drawing comics. I kinda stopped them for now until I can understand how to work them.
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Haha yeah, but I figure I'm not gonna improve unless I just try and... do them? I guess. xD
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That puppy is doomed! 8D
Anyway, I really like your audition thus far! I espicially enjoy the atmosphere of this page!
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/cue Jaws theme
Thanks! Haha, the magical atmosphere power of greyscale! 8D
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On the sixth panel I think you could have made it more apparent the dogs were fleeing. I had to look really hard to find them. Maybe make them more white in that panel to stand out, instead of look like blurs blending into the scenery.
Otherwise a good start! I can't wait to see the rest of your audition.
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Ugh, yes. xD Originally they were going to be more prominent, then I effed up the perspective and they were reduced to those tiny blurs in the corner. I might go back and fix it if I finish the rest of the pages first. xP
Thank you! OuO
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Focus on getting the rest of the audition done, yeah. xD
It isn't that big of a problem but just something to think about in other pages where there's a lot of action going on.
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