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WolvesFire — Counting My Steps
Published: 2008-09-15 22:28:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description While counting my steps
I look up
And the only thing I see
Is surrounded by completely darkness

All the light is replaced
By darkness
All the beauty
Isn’t there anymore.

I’ve  never seen
This kind of
Perfect darkness
So frightened, that it would be beautiful

Still counting my steps
While I shuffle
With my feet on the hard, cold floor

My hand reach to
The wall of stone
I don’t know what I feel inside
Just the outside feels cold and rough

Still surrounded by perfectly darkness
Still counting my steps
No light to follow
I don’t fear anything
I’m alone, but just keep walking
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Comments: 6

waterfallheart [2008-09-20 16:07:51 +0000 UTC]

it's beautiful...
Well done

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WolvesFire In reply to waterfallheart [2008-09-20 17:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much !!

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waterfallheart In reply to WolvesFire [2008-09-20 17:39:33 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome...
Keep on writing
You do it great
x

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AutumnSeason-Artsy [2008-09-15 23:54:02 +0000 UTC]

The Flow Of This Was Very Nice. I Did Like It!

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WolvesFire In reply to AutumnSeason-Artsy [2008-09-16 18:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!! Thanks E^__^3
Don't know what to say, but thanks Very surprised that someone do like my poems

xx Wolfsfire

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AutumnSeason-Artsy In reply to WolvesFire [2008-09-16 22:30:57 +0000 UTC]

really?, wow!, its very good!

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