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Published: 2009-09-10 10:14:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description How much damage
Can you do to yourself
By just hoping

Every time those burning tears
In your eyes
Every time the feeling
Of a lump in your throat

Mixed up thoughts are making you crazy
Fantasy and real life are flooding through each other
Can’t see anything clear
What is real, what is imaginary

Breaking yourself from the inside
The wall around you start showing holes
Everything can come through it
You got no defense anymore

Getting lost in the darkness of your head
Searching for a way out
Needing just a little bit light
Can you give it to me?
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Comments: 7

pifoofairy [2009-09-11 01:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Not bad not bad. I so understand. I wrote something similar but I dunno if I posted it on here..closes thing I have is on here now. I like it. I like the picture you've got attached to!

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nicky14 [2009-09-10 13:31:36 +0000 UTC]

*flashes a light your way* OMS, so scary I thought of making a hopeless hope poem last night and now you have it posted already! It's good though^^

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WolvesFire In reply to nicky14 [2009-09-10 18:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the light!!!

Hihi yeah that's scary 0.. It's funny cause I felt yesterday almost the same as you did

Thanks, I thought it was good too
If you post a hopless hope poem I'm going to read it for sure

xx

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nicky14 In reply to WolvesFire [2009-09-10 20:11:56 +0000 UTC]

I will, I made it already, just have to post it.

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royalocean [2009-09-10 10:24:28 +0000 UTC]

The imagery is great. I can honestly say these are feelings I've often felt. Very touching piece, wonderful job!

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WolvesFire In reply to royalocean [2009-09-10 11:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Ohw thanks!! That means a lot to me

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royalocean In reply to WolvesFire [2009-09-10 11:13:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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