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Baby,I know that we
Are made for each other
I feel that my presence
You don´t bother
Please let me stay with you…!
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Splitting up
Cause we need time alone
Never felt so lonely
Never felt so weak
But when you take a look
Into the future
I hope you see the light
Hoping you´ll just see you and me
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Cause baby,
I know that we
Are made for each other
I feel that my presence
You don´t bother
Please let me stay with you…!
Just let me love you tonight
Love me like I do
Just love me and I’m loving you too
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Comments: 2
sanguinerain [2009-07-16 18:46:36 +0000 UTC]
It's just a slightly different way of writing that you've posted. It's not bad, not something to be unhappy with. Often times, I'll purposely try to write in a slightly different way to keep my ideas feeling fresh and different.
You say you've been feeling "strange" lately, and you describe this poem as being "strange," so maybe this poem is the result of those emotions.
It's not a bad poem, and I could really imagine this as a song lyric.
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WolvesFire In reply to sanguinerain [2009-07-16 22:51:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Your comment makes me feel much happier about it.
This was something that came into my mind when I was sleeping last night. So I had to write it down
Funny if you think about it
xx
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