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xcommandercrazyx — Valentine [NSFW]
Published: 2008-02-16 04:50:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Thump, I grab a towel and whip off my face.
Thump, I grab the scalpel and make my incision.
Thump, I pull back the skin and ribs.
Thump, an everlasting beat that never ends until...
Thump, I cut the first artery, blood splattering my face, but I don't care
it has to be done.
thump, I cut away the rest of the artery's and veins and take out my prize,
my. . . everlasting . . . Valentine
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xcommandercrazyx - me again

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Comments: 12

jadethestone [2010-09-01 02:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That was dark!! But also really well done! You make very good use of the composition of your poems.

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xcommandercrazyx In reply to jadethestone [2010-11-13 19:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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jadethestone In reply to xcommandercrazyx [2010-11-16 02:09:31 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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jennofur86 [2008-04-11 07:28:01 +0000 UTC]

love it! so dark, crule, yet romantic! Fantastic! xx

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xcommandercrazyx In reply to jennofur86 [2008-04-12 03:33:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i guess thats what happens when your alone on valentines day.but oh well i still had fun anyway.

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Kitala [2008-02-16 06:21:41 +0000 UTC]

O.O WOOOOO! *does a lil dance*

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xcommandercrazyx In reply to Kitala [2008-02-16 20:42:03 +0000 UTC]

its good? it just kinda came to me when i was on register

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Kitala In reply to xcommandercrazyx [2008-02-16 23:22:03 +0000 UTC]

lol, yes, yes it was good.

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Aisling-M [2008-02-16 04:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Oooh... I love it.
Not like the "I give you my heart."
It's like the stalker version of that mixed with sociopath.
Very nice.

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xcommandercrazyx In reply to Aisling-M [2008-02-16 20:43:07 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks

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Satzukii [2008-02-16 04:52:22 +0000 UTC]

This...should be matured.

Very gory. D:

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xcommandercrazyx In reply to Satzukii [2008-02-16 20:44:26 +0000 UTC]

umm ok i didn't think it was that bad but i will take that in mind.

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