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This is just some basic training, practicing the basics.Related content
Comments: 25
BlockJuice [2009-11-21 03:09:24 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good, except he bobs his arms too much when he's walking. Love your style though.
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BeauART In reply to xPaintball [2009-04-08 17:40:01 +0000 UTC]
Less than three doubleyou minus you 1 plus 1!
= (<3 you too.)
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BraindeadKnight [2009-04-04 07:08:48 +0000 UTC]
The movement looks great, I like the kick.
I dont know why they coplain about the long arms, its your style and thats ok.
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blue-beaver [2009-04-03 22:56:37 +0000 UTC]
arms are long lolz... not that it's bad imo...
nice style.
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M-authentic [2009-04-03 16:47:52 +0000 UTC]
uber vette movement...maar die soundeffects lijken net of ie op hakken loopt
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xPaintball In reply to M-authentic [2009-04-03 17:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Haha Het waren stappen op cement
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AnimatorRawGreen In reply to xPaintball [2009-04-03 20:30:28 +0000 UTC]
it's much different than your old style, and it was coming along so well too...
your arms make em look like gorillas, no offence.
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AnimatorRawGreen In reply to xPaintball [2009-04-04 14:51:35 +0000 UTC]
not bad, it's just awkward. I'm sure you'll get it adjusted yourself with practice and stuff. idk
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I-Sneeze-Colors [2009-04-03 04:38:43 +0000 UTC]
I think on the jump you could of made him cross his legs. Not like cross them, but move on in front of the other as if he was taking a step in the air. Just my opinion though.
The ball fell too fast on each bounce.
He could of bent his front need a tad bit more for exaggeration in his punch.
I liked the run.
Others, I'm too lazy to comment. But try to keep those movements fluid and smooth. I know this may be stupid, but I remember in pivot they said move every joint of the stick in each frame.
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xPaintball In reply to I-Sneeze-Colors [2009-04-03 09:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for critics, I agree on the last part i guess
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KenseiT [2009-04-02 16:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeah your limb sizes shrink and grow a hell load which just looks wrong. But I guess your improving so yeah keep it up
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Raffeh [2009-04-02 16:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Run: badly looped, arms are a bit too long.
Walk: Arms need to be more relaxed, and the loop is really bad.
Jump: The bending down before jump was really bad, it was badly anticipated, but the jump itself was good.
Kick: It was good, but the arms were in really weird positions :/
Punch: Elastic, much? [Arms streched and shrunk wtf]
Ball bounce: Hated it. The ball fell was too fast, and the peak was way to slow.
Thar.
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KingJelly In reply to Raffeh [2009-07-16 20:46:16 +0000 UTC]
hey your not perfect either, and did you like watch for forever, trying to find every mistake?
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