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Published: 2010-06-14 16:09:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 339; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Do you see me?I am behind closed doors
Looking through the window
Looking at you
Do you see me?
No, of course you don't
I am just
Another face
No one important
Because you don't want me
Maybe
If I try I can be more than just a face
More than a passerby
And I will deserve more than a glance
I speak
And try to get your attention
You don't hear
I yell
So you can look in my direction
But the windows are too thick
You don't hear me
I scream
Trying hard to let someone listen
But they don't hear
No one hears
Because I am just a face
Behind closed doors
I look at you
But no one looks back
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Comments: 18
Good use of metaphors, it has great emotion and rythm. Well done!
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thank you much~ i appreciate this
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Very nice. It could go well with the Gray picture. ^^
I'm, like, scared to type a smiley face, it's so hard to smile after reading a poem like this! ^^'
But beautiful job. When I read something, I tend to get some sort of scene in my head....yeah, that's right, your best friend is crazy....but I definitely see black and white, like an old movie or something. But a modern sort of setting.
Alrighty I'mma shut up now. XD But I hope you get the point. You establish a nice mood. ^-^
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no no, thats really interesting, i love that it can show i picture for it as well!
i can understand the smiley face thing, i do the same thing! all the time
thanks for the fav as well 
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Yaay~
Double yaaay! XD
Love ya too. 
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quadruple yay??
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No, no more math for three months!! We're done with that. XP
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mhm thats true...but a lot of other stuff tho..
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wait till i tell you what kind of stuff i have
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sometimes when I read something like this, at first I think: oh no, they're going to crap it soon, but when I read this one till the end, I realised it wasn't spoiled by anything ... wow, really, nice job
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aww thank you im really glad you like it 
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