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Published: 2007-04-19 02:53:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 187; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description My world is tumbling down around me as I write
all this down.
My candle is about to go out and leave me alone in this
darkness.
I have to stay strong for everyone around me,
crying would show I'm weak.
I'm not getting the love I need so I'm searching
else where but failing.
I don't want to bring anyone down with me,
so I keep it all to myself.
I'm constantly wearing a mask to show people what they want to see,  
not what's actually there.
I can't get through this alone,
I'm dying inside.
Talking brings tears to my eyes but I can't cry.
I have to stay strong.
I'm slowly dying in this lonely pit of despair
the walls are too high to climb
Someone's lowering a rope, but it's too short to reach me.
The walls are collapsing, traping
me for eternity.
I see a light cracking through but it's really
dim.
I'll be stuck here forever. Alone, and without love.
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Comments: 8

amazonite [2007-04-24 03:57:14 +0000 UTC]

You are loved. Never forget it...and come talk if you need to.

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Rain-Feather [2007-04-20 03:48:52 +0000 UTC]

..I love you Erica!!! *Hugs*

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Unclrenzo [2007-04-19 05:12:38 +0000 UTC]

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NeonLites [2007-04-19 04:19:16 +0000 UTC]

You may feel alone, but it won't be without love.

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Amanda-San [2007-04-19 03:20:12 +0000 UTC]

You'll always be loved.


I <3 you.

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livechickens [2007-04-19 02:56:59 +0000 UTC]

this poem is well written, i think it is very good

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blackorchid5583 [2007-04-19 02:56:55 +0000 UTC]

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Chernzobog [2007-04-19 02:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Hope you feel better: that was a touching poem

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