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Published: 2007-06-10 23:42:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 4273; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 146
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a 2 page extract from my pencil comics - a Comic Fight (CF)it's when you have two people and you take turns in drawing a battle or event, or a story with them...
Well, Mirune got caught in a stonefall, from the impact of one of the monsters.
right in front of bytes.... so...
Many would be wondering why i used Onee-san instead of older sister, because it is a closer representation of what she would have said. There words mean technically the same thing, that much is true, But onee-san has a huge sense of respect and dependence inside it, cultural differences, i say
now y-all see why and how nad I am at comics TWT"
need a lot of help in the panel layout....
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Comments: 26
I swear, you should be doing manga already. Your skills are far beyond mine! TwTU
Please keep up your manga work!
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TWTb still practicing!!! >W
keep yous up too ne?
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my god your manga making is awesome
i feel special by being your friend on msn xD
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>//////< really?
Thankyou!!!!!
-3-/ talk to me more, i need more mental escapes from the hardships of this world
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It's a long page... O_O But as long as you draw it nicely, it wouldn't matter as much. ^^ This is what I've been waiting for, yay! XD My spirit is burning again, I wanna draw a comic too!
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^it's like that, just take the because out ^^"
TwT i'm glad to hear that! once you are free, let's rock~!
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I see~ I should've take a better look before, I would've noticed that. X3
Eheh, bad timing to burn the spirit, I kept on drawing just a few hours before the exam... 
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Fair enough and you alreday done a greta job with the layout despite being a little unconventional.
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unconventional ^^"? lol, yup, it's actually a 2 pager ^^/
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white hair is evil?!
..........HORRAY!!!!
AWESOME COMIC!!!!!
I WAN TO SEE MORE!!!!! ZD
...just kidding..u can slowly do it~~
i can wait......
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considering a huge amount of my characters have white hair, (even mirune at a point).....
i mush have something fir pokerfaced geneuses with white hair... lol
the last 2 lines are actually contradicting ^^"/
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lol
hmmm a tip if you ever make a flashback.......use black outline err not the panel but the outside panel
lol
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This one looks really good as well! I hope to see more! ^^
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well some of the tips you can look out for:
1) in 1 page, there shud only be around 8-10 panels. more than that will look too crowdy.
2) and tho the background characters give no particular significant meaning to the storyline so far, the part where everyone the few people around her shud be a bit more detailed. not too detail but yea XD;;
hope these helps
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ah, this is actually a 2 page but submitting them separately woll cause it to loose some mood, since you have to wait for it to load ^^"
there MUST still be people using that 56K
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XD;;; yeaaa~ lolz but i guess yea. so this is actually 2 pages ka~ well i say its just nice then
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Looks really good still ^^
Your pencil work is so awesome <3<3
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