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Despite =Crow1992 saying she's planning to quit (and she has valid reasons for it that I'm sorry for) I'm still going to finish this comic (thank god all the pages are actually done!). She at least deserves that.
I hope you can still sum up the spirit to submit your pages, because I enjoy reading them! 
Soooo on this page I'm sure you were expected Norge to get gouged in the back or something right? well not yet... I mean what? *COUGH* I don't really like this page that much anyway.... the proportions aren't perfect...
DENIED, SADI. YOU HAVE BEEN ELBOWED. Teehee~~
Panel four, let me explain; at the presence of blood, Norge starts to slip into a vampire phase. He hasn't tasted her blood so he's not going full vampire, but the adrenaline and the blood dripping down his cheek is starting to cause that change, thus the eye changing color to that lovely Halloween orange. I don't know exactly how and when he changes but I think that's about right.
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I'm not entirely sure what's really happening in the last panel. There's alot of nice movement here, but the panelling does get confusing down the bottom.
Why is Sadi bleeding in the last panel but not in the third?
Just a little thing to think about- first panel, you're going for a strong downward movement. because it's a long horozontal panel, it naturally conflicts with the motion- do you see what I'm getting at?
Still digging those redtones though. And teh evil Sadi grin CB
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Yes thank you, for highlighting the epic fail that I already pointed out to save myself the effort of not privately banging my head on my desk for that failure. I wouldn't want to do that--my dad just added finish to this nice lovely desk and I wouldn't want my brains to dent or stain it in anyway. THUS why I originally pointed out my overall failure on this page to have it out in the open and not feel bad about it.
Thank you. Keep that color change in mind! :3
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Sorry, I read the artists comments but must have blatantly missed it.
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That's quite alright, people tend to do that frequently--skim over a description and not quite comprehend what the message was conveying. I myself do that sometimes since nowadays most things especially art are about instant gratification, which the picture offers more of rather than the wordy description. In some cases reading that much actually causes people physical pain, which I find really rather pitiable. When you think about it though, reading descriptions could be very important--sometimes crucial to one's health!
For example, if one were to walk up to a door with a lengthy sign on it informing the reader that beyond this door was an unpleasantly large amount of venomous snakes, but the person simply didn't have the patience to read it, then more than likely they would go into that room with an unpleasantly large amount of venomous snakes and thus have to deal with an unpleasantly large amount of venomous snakes.
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Damn. Those snakes just bit me D:
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WELL SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU DON'T READ THE DESCRIPTIONS?? >:1
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But I diiiiiid... Just didn't pay enough attention. Shame on me XD
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shame on you indeed. *hands you the Rubix Cube of Shame* >:1
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*holds the cube aloft and thereby aknowledges that she is indeed, fail*
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YOU HAVE BEEN CLEANSED!
Good for you. You'll be receiving a congratulatory gift basket in 6-10 weeks.
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In panel one it does kind of look like she's biting his pak or something.
I think it's good of you to keep holding off on having Sadi get a hit in.. XD
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Yes, that's my fail showing. Please don't mind it, it's been acting up as of late. I put Sadi's head to shame in that panel and it rather makes me want to dig into my brain to find my artistic comprehension and poke it with a pencil, saying most angrily "Dear lord what is wrong with you? Have you not watched Invader Zim enough to plainly see that an irken's head angle, when drawn at that downward and slightly covered position, would be executed in a completely different way than what your abhorrent "creativity" has spawned? I am disgusted with you!"
I didn't say that to my artistic comprehension though. But since I technically THOUGHT it, it got angry at me and decided to completely ruin the rest of the panels on this page as well. So I suppose I payed the price for thinking.
It's going to drag, another example of my fail and a sprinkling of peer pressure from my schoolchums saying "aw he can't die THAT fast! Make him hit her back!"
Thank you, Skyler Murphy.
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Tut, tut, don't be so hard on yourself. I happen to like the other panels.
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I'd say that the only one without any critical flaws is panel three, but that one is simple and boring. "oh nooooo evil Sadi!" don't see that all the time. *headdesk*
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It...seemed like the most accurate noise to make. |D Though that sound is reminiscent of the sound that one Nightcrawler from X-men makes when he teleports.
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Ohhhh dang! Not good! Right in the wounded stomach! Awww, poor Sadi!
At least the pain will make her meaner, right?
And awwww! poor Crow! It would have been cool to see the rest of her pages *sniff*
And meeeeh! The perspectives are okay on this! Sure, it could use a tiny bit of work, but it is still really good! It still makes me jealous.... huh what? lol
I love the red around the edges of panel four. Nice touch!
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xDD thank you. Yeah I hope Crow isn't really sure she's giving up..
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Your welcome
And me neither! Her comic is pretty awesome too!
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thank you, but I wonder if you could truly love it if you expressed that love in such a simple sentence? After all if you TRULY loved it then you would have typed something along the lines of "Dear lord this page fills me with a sense of fluffiness and adoration that I don't even get when I see a picture of Edward cullen without a shirt!"
If you'd said something along THOSE lines then I suppose I would have believed you, but as such I'll just take that superfluous sentence with the grace of the overused words, "Thank you!"
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um ok i do like it i just like to keep things short and simple
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Nice colors <3
Yes...Sadi you've been denied epically. |3
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heh thanks.
EPIC FAAAAIIIILLL
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Welcome <3
Mhm WORD YO--/shot
oh yeah...here's my other entry :'D [link]
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OOOOOOOH.
Awwww 
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I'm assuming private, it's a little sensitive.
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Okay, I respect that ^^
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In truth I think that if Sadi were to be any character from Left For Dead she would be a hunter, despite other people observing that she would make a good witch instead. I counter with the simple logic that Sadi does not share the same personality as a witch, at least not the personality PRIOR to the activation of the witch's anger, in which she goes rather insane and attempts to kill the person who was bugging her. Even so, Sadi doesn't do much of that anyway, and is more like a hunter in her excitement and overall sneakiness that hunters possess.
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Technically Sadi DIDN'T use slash, as confirmed in panel three, in which case she's merely PREPARING to use slash, though even so I don't think she would USE Slash, more something along the lines of Rip or Tear or STAB, since her position doesn't really allow the power and coordination that one typically uses in a SLASH, as demonstrated best by lightweight swords. See if you swung an ax, that would be more like a SWING, not a slash, since it's so big and heavy and doesn't allow for much formulated coordination or specific muscle movement as a lightweight sword does.
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Mah brain hurts. D| JK. Alright.. Just trying to make pokemon jokes. XD
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Lol I know. I was just rambling.
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DROP AND GIVE ME 9,000!!! D<
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and spit shine muh shoes >:U
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XD it was the first thing that came to mind when I saw it
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