HOME | DD

FluffyFluffs [2013-05-27 19:21:55 +0000 UTC]

outstanding

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

MLP-Silver-Quill [2012-11-25 05:40:10 +0000 UTC]

The angle of the face is a bishojo style and I like how you added shading beneath the chin and at the back of the hair. It really adds depth to the image.

To strengthen the piece even further, I recommend adding more detail to the eyes and making the shoulders less square. Given that this character has more delicate features, the even-set shoulders suggest a more muscular build which conflicts with the face.

It's good that you're practicing and I hope you keep it up!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SDSilva94 [2012-10-09 19:58:21 +0000 UTC]

The hair is a little weird and the face needs cheeks so it doesn't look like a triangle. The shoulder on the right doesnt slope like the other shoulder. The one on the right should look more like the left. The eyes and lips look nice the way they are. Also the nose looks a bit long.

I hope that helps :>

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

runningbox11 [2012-10-08 22:49:50 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The eyes are fantastic and the proportions are very well done. The shading and general perception is great. The only area in need of work is the hair but it doesn't need much, just a little more of it. Otherwise it's really well done!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1