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Sara-Ford [2009-07-01 17:42:15 +0000 UTC]

The Knee is too small and pointy which makes that whole leg Vi mentioned too slim, which might be what he's seeing. And I also agree with him on the arm, yer boobs go up into your deltoid muscles (and might actually be a part of the whole grouping) and that's what makes the Hallow for you pit. The clavicle and pelvis look real good, you seem to wrap your brain around those weird shapes in our hips and thighs better then me (though most people can, it's my artistic weakness after hands )

I like the really dark psuedo lines that made it into your shading and that straight leg has some good detail for the knee

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ayellowbirds [2009-07-01 17:22:46 +0000 UTC]

The point where the left arm (on the viewer's right-hand side) meets the torso looks off. The lower line on the arm should have a downward curve towards the breast at the end, rather than just pointing up towards the neck as it does now. The shading looks really excellent. Hard to come up with particular critiques for the rest of it; something looks off about the folded leg, but i can't quite say what.

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